Tuesday, August 02, 2016

Complete Stories: Flannery O'Connor

 

34 thoughts on “Flannery O’Connor: Complete Stories

  1. THE GERANIUM
    “His throat was going to pop on account of a nigger – a damn nigger that patted him on the back and called him ‘old-timer’.”
    A pungent, abrasive period-text that really bites your eye-dust, as this old-timer from possum country needs to live with his daughter in New York, as he tries to acclimatise himself to the endless buildings and the new peckiing orders, eased at least by the habitual appearance of a geranium in the opposite apartment each day between certain hours… Until even that crashes to the ground.
    The sound of the word ‘geranium’ sounds to me like a word for a comfort stop for an old-timer’s frequently loose urinations like mine?
  2. THE BARBER
    “They couldn’t say Negro–nigger–colored–black. Jacobs said he had come home every night and shouted, ‘NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER’ out the back window.”
    My reading today this story from the 1940s for the first time has amazingly come at the exact triangulation of the Brexit coordinates in 2016 – and Brexit’s hindsight racist raison d’etre. Foresight, too, no doubt.
    Here a customer has passing time’s recurring argument with a barber about voting for a then current election’s progressive candidate, an argument in the hearing of the black boy who sweeps up after each shave. And the bitter confused emotions where the lathered bib is not removed when the progressive customer leaves amid the sound of society’s blades sharpening, I imagine. I feel this story was uncannily written, in prophecy, for the time of Brexit…for my eyes and this opportune real-time review.
    Brexit as a word sounds like a blade snagging on a whisker…a faltering gash.
    • Flannery O’Connor (1925 – 1964) – from back cover:
      “She is a modern writer in the widest sense, in that her stories are all preoccupied with obsessions at the heart of our modern world.”
  3. WILDCAT
    “Old Gabriel shuffled across the room waving his stick slowly sideways in front of him.”
    [Yesterday I had not read any of these stories when I instinctively set up that art installation of a photo above for this book’s review, and I had no idea that quote was coming up in this story!]
    This is a story of a blind old man mainly in a rexited dialect of abrasive dialogue layered with similar in rooted prose, with his remembering a boyhood when a wildcat killed someone (tellingly a ‘nigger’ in the old man’s amoral parlance but moral in retributive hindsight), and now — in a Poe-like ‘Tell-Tale Heart’ type of suspense – he awaits his own similar destiny. A striking portrait of growing death-dementia.
  4. THE CROP
    “Miss Willerton always crumbed the table.” – the story’s first sentence.
    Later: “‘First sentences,’she always said, ‘came to her — like a flash! Just like a flash!’ she would say and snap her fingers, ‘like a flash!’ And she built her story up from them.”
    With the opening post-breakfast scene, I thought I was in a story by my favourite writer Elizabeth Bowen. (Why do I now always think of Brexit every time I hear the word ‘breakfast’?) A truly writerly, fascinatingly experimental, story, where Miss Willerton starts her story of the sharecropper with hookworm, and his wife, on her typewriter and it is as if the text enfolds her and she herself becomes the wife for real. A remarkable story, well before its time. Words as phonemes as well as a crop of crumbs. When you are a God of a story you sometimes have to roll around in its mud yourself like a Dog.
  5. THE TURKEY
    “He remembered the minister had said young men were going to the devil by the dozens these day and age; forsaking gentle ways; walking in the tracks of Satan.”
    Living-shooting games, as our 12 year old boy hero wants to outdo his older brother by proudly bringing home the Turkey he bags, creaturification as told by another set of abrasive phonemes in the form of story text while he dares the act of blasphemy with various spoken words, and finds himself kidded by those devil-boys out of his Turkey prey – as well as kidded out of prayer or hope itself against such devils? Told and very telling.
  6. THE TRAIN
    “The turn of his head was like and the back of his neck was like and the short reach of his arm.”
    A hypnotic shorthand prose with vivid exegetic energetic syntax and longhand breathers between, as the train endlessly winds from beginning to end to beginning again, in 19 year old Haze’s haze of memories, of places, of his mother (structured in dream-like thought like the bed berth in the train ceiling and like something else) and the ‘gulch nigger’ porter who opens that berth or birth and who looks like.
    Amazing mind-glitching stuff, nightmarish like the Horror genre but much more like.
  7. THE PEELER
    “Haze’s shadow was now behind him and now before him and now and then broken up by other people’s shadows, but when it was by itself, stretching behind him, it was a thin nervous shadow walking backwards.”
    Another Haze, this one Haze Motes, not the previous Haze Wickers on the train, here in town, clumsily servicing a woman named Leora Watts, sees and interacts with a man selling potato peelers, and he sees and interacts with a blind man called Asa Shrike and his girl in “men’s shoes”, “men’s shoes”, “men’s shoes”, a sound like a religion if you repeat the words enough (my observation, not the story’s), a blind man giving out Jesus Loves You paper tracts, and there is also a boy called Enoch Emory of the same age who tries to befriend Haze Motes. I know exactly what this story means, because it means so many different things from which you can choose in a bespoke fashion.
    It is a very disturbing, amazingly evocative, idiosyncratically well-written, eventually Aickman-like story and people who know my taste in literature will surely follow me to this story if they know what is good for them. What’s bad for them, too. Maybe the peeler is to be used to skin off the nude white woman in the casket that men stare down at (not a ‘nigger’, as it happens, in this story’s parlance) and her moving moles – or motes?
  8. THE HEART OF THE PARK
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    And in this story’s later end scene, after his obsessively routine ritual route via the FROSTY BOTTLE and the (‘Nemonymous Night’-like) ZOO, we now encounter again the earlier Enoch Emery who eventually reaches the Museum, thus bringing the above conceit to devastating full circle. And the deadpan goal of sighting the shrunken man.
    Enoch had been obsessively spying on scantily clad women at the swimming pool but then he meets Haze again (now Hazel Weaver, not Hazel Wickens or Hazel Motes), a Haze who wants to find the couple who sold the previous story’s peeler, now named Asa and Sabbath Moats. Moats rather than Shrike.
    This is amazing material, with many startling awakenings towards – if not fully reaching – the text’s ‘dark secret center.’ All expressed, perhaps, through an Enochian brain divided into two parts…
    “The part in communication with his blood did the figuring but it never said anything in words. The other part was stocked up with all kinds of words and phrases.”
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  9. A STROKE OF GOOD FORTUNE
    “They had been the dried-up type, dried up and Pitman dried into them, them and Pitman shrunk down into something all dried and puckered up.”
    Thank shrunken museum man again?
    Meanwhile, this is a heart-rending, incantatory rite of passage in a place called Pitman, up the possibly significant mole-coloured carpeted stairs, climbed by a woman called Ruby who is ‘only’ 34 years old. Breathless and seemingly fat? her heart troubling her? Her projected fortitude and worth compared to her younger brother Rufus who has ‘as much get as a floor mop.’
    When you learn the implications that what must have passed through her head (literally) at the end after learning that her fatness may be more from seeding than from a lardy heart. Makes it even more heart-rending. Shocking, too. And ironic. Powerful.
    The power is conveyed by the mind-glitching style as well as by the obliquely outlying objective-correlatives that here are not objects but the other people that populate this climbing mole-coloured land of tenement stairs. People. Like Bill Hill, Ruby’s husband, who was supposed to be careful when shafting HER stairway, I guess – and the plot-significant pistol she stumbles upon belonging to the boy Hartley Gilfeet (feet with shoes, here women’s shoes, compare the men’s shoes I mentioned earlier), Mr clever clever Jerger, Madam Zoleeda, and Laverne Watts (cf Leora Watts earlier in this book).
    “…all she could do was look at her feet and shoe em to Rufus, shoe em to Rufus and he was an enfant and she was thirty-four years old. ‘Rufus is an enfant!’ she wailed.”
  10. ENOCH AND THE GORILLA
    “His brain, both parts, was completely empty.”
    Enoch Emery now grapples with an unfit umbrella and later changes places with a movie-house gorilla. Is it a coincidence that both umbrella and gorilla end with rella and rilla respectively?
    “A NUTTY SURPRISE!”
    I know what this enjoyable, but otherwise inscrutable, story means but only knowing what it means from within the gestalt or umbrella of the book itself, rather than from any overriding movie-house hindsight.
    “He discovered while he did this that he still had his shoes on,”
  11. A GOOD MAN IS HARD TO FIND
    “In case of an accident, anyone seeing her dead on the highway would know at once that she was a lady.”
    The nameless grandmother of this family, made up of Bailey her son, his nameless wife, their two children John Wesley and June Star, is the jinx that tries to prevent the jinx by bringing them closer to the jinx. A fated car journey weekend break, if such a thing as a break existed in those far-off United Sates days where one could say, as she did: “Little niggers in the country don’t have things like we do. If I could paint, I’d paint that picture,” she said, Flannery said, a United States where one could write for different reasons: “…Europe was entirely to blame for the way things were now.” Where one could play pareidolia with clouds to while away a car journey. Where this story’s Misfit has the access to guns to do what other misfits in the United States do today. A sharply characterful journey through those States as long as you keep clear which state is which! A journey to a clearing out of souls that accidents can’t do. Including that grandmother left like a lady who had once been courted by Mr. Edgar Atkins Teagarden, with the initials EAT. Just turn off onto a dirt road, doesn’t matter which one, the result would have been the same. “The Misfit pointed the toe of his shoe into the ground and made a little hole and then covered it up again.” Just what these stories manage to do, but you know where to find those holes again, or think you do before you forget they even existed. Each review of mine a misfit for the foot it shods. You just need reminding every day, shot through with memory of what you’ve done, good or bad. A story that made me think. Entertaining, page-turning, too.
    “‘I call myself The Misfit,’ he said, ‘because I can’t make what all I done wrong fit what all I gone through in punishment.”
  12. imageA LATE ENCOUNTER WITH THE ENEMY
    “Living had got to be such a habit with him that he couldn’t conceive of any other condition.”
    A touching, sometimes hilarious, account of 104 year old General Sash and his 62 year old granddaughter Sally Poker Sash… As if she took that very poker to open further the trepanned hole in his head. A very engaging pair of characters, with him on the brink of dementia transcending his pride and memory of beautiful girls (“guls”)… And she on some brink, too, when found wearing the wrong shoes for her graduation ceremony, an occasion which she so very much wants her grandfather to last out to attend and to witness.
    The portrait of words, as portrayed by words, the words entering his head, is one of the great moments of literature, I would guess. As is that sudden brink between something and nothing, with only confusion between.
  13. THE LIFE YOU SAVE MAY BE YOUR OWN
    “Then he took a box of wooden matches from his pocket and struck one on his shoe.”
    A trampish one-armed toolbox-carrying handyman named Tom T. Shiftlet aka Aaron Sparks or George Speeds or Thompson Bright — with a thing about extracting and studying a heart but not being able to know anything about the person from whom the heart has been extracted — arrives at the house of mother Lucynell Crater and her special-needs daughter also named Lucynell Crater…and Lucynell Snr’s automobile that hasn’t worked since her husband died….
    Well, things pan out, under configurations of sun and moon and planets and a turnip, not unlike the cranking of astrological disharmony, and those name aliases I donated above to Shiftlet, because someone like him simply must have had aliases, with our having learnt more about him while he gets thicker with the Craters and then abandons them…
    Instead of our watching words entering the earlier General’s head, we have Shiftlet’s heart ever popping in and out.
    A clogging cog of a story with sparks and speeds that it will be hard to forget!
  14. THE RIVER
    “‘That’s Bevel,’ Mrs. Connin said, taking off her coat. ‘It’s a co-incident he’s named the same as the preacher. These boys are J.C., Spivey, and Sinclair, and that’s Sarah Mildred on the porch. Take off that coat and hang it on the bed post, Bevel.'”
    Except the boy’s real name is not Bevel Summers but Harry Ashfield, and gratuitously he said he had the same name as the healing preacher down by the river, the River of Blood, the River of Christ, and this story is imbued with the gratuitousness of objects and motivations like the other stories, now with skeletons, pigs, the sun balanced in the sky, and names like Emma Stevens Oakley…a random gratuitousness that somehow makes more sense than sensible deliberation. And the healing of a hangover as well as of a purple lump on a left temple or of cancer itself, by gratuitously baptising oneself in that River of Life while chased by a salacious long-pig, I guess.
    To bevel: to reduce a square edge on an object to a sloping edge.
  15. A CIRCLE IN THE FIRE
    “‘Why, think of all those poor Europeans,’ Mrs. Cope went on, ‘that they put in boxcars like cattle and rode them to Siberia. Lord,’ she said, ‘we ought to spend half our time on our knees.'”
    And her Negroes, too, who spend their time stretching necks forward to make appear they are going faster than they are. And her twelve year old daughter, Sally Virginia. And her friend, Mrs. Pritchard who relished talk of a woman who gave birth while in an iron lung, or even cuddling it in a coffin. And the three boys, Powell Boyd, Garfield Smith and W. T. Harper who come to her farm with one of them having lived there before while his father worked for Mrs. Cope. But CAN she cope, I ask? Well, this book’s holy and unholy gratuitousness prevails and boys will be boys, nasty and nude, as Sally Virginia finds out. Rude, too. And the fire they set in a circle – round them? One wonders, as this book continues to set fires upon the winds of wonder, haunting the backbrain recluse of the reader’s head. But then I recall an earlier sentence in this masochistic abrasive story –
    “The sun burned so fast that it seemed to be trying to set everything in sight on fire.”
    A direct astrology of its spirit?
  16. cropped-sv2-23THE DISPLACED PERSON
    “…piled high with bodies of dead naked people…”
    As a monument beside the Judge’s grave in the woman farm owner’s own image? The cherubim of war. This is a major work in the canon of all literature, I am sure. So important, I will not, in due respect to the nameless dead in my photograph, quote the names of any of this novelette’s characters – as has been my wont so far in this review – and I will only mention that this is a very disturbing horror story to out-horror works that call themselves horror works as a genre. It is the tale of the balance of people – on a mid twentieth century farm in America – being broken by the arrival of one of those migrants that have hit the news in our present day as I write this. The pecking order balance at its tipping point, that foodline of farm owner, white trash, negroes and now displaced persons, here a Pole from the European war. The priest and the peacock, being just one devastating part of this rejigged jigsaw. And the woman, the dead Judge’s wife, her being inveigled into things, a new map being drawn of human contact. Absolutely staggering how a work like this subsisting all these years without my knowledge. So many quotable quotes. The honesty of labour, the dishonesty of motives, the economics of human vulnerability to scarcity. The synchronous tractor part, the spontaneity of trying to rejig that jigsaw to its previous state by the gabble of words fighting words entering this book’s trepanned head, memory of a grenade, body parts grappling with other body parts, the ruthless gratuitous act for l’étranger, while vast visionary panoplies of text upon the page, made into what they actually are, stay in the head. No review can do justice to it. An apocalyptic apocrypha for our times.
  17. A TEMPLE OF THE HOLY GHOST
    “‘God could strike you deaf dumb and blind,’ the cook said, ‘and then you wouldn’t be as smart as you is.’
    ‘I would still be smarter than some,’ the child said.”
    As we have seen child girls before in this book surveying the antics of others, others often older than the child is, a child with some inferred condescension, and I suspect this character is how the author remembers herself to have been? Here, she becomes involved with the two slightly older boy-crazy fourteen year old girls come to stay for a couple of days from their convent school in their convent clothes, then effectively matchmaked by the child, and when they come back from being taken to the fair by a couple of ‘men’, they tell the child stories of a special discomforting freak they’d seen there, and the child inveigles them into a form of collusive self-confession, and there ensues a whole unfolding panoply of ‘hep’ from God and a rabbit spitting out its new young…
    “A fair lasted five or six days and there was a special afternoon for school children and a special night for niggers.”
    A telling precocious vision of that era’s educational, sexual and religious mores. All very well characterised. And this book’s sun now “like an elevated Host drenched in blood…”
  18. THE ARTIFICIAL NIGGER
    “He knew that now he was wandering into a black strange place where nothing was like it had ever been before, a long old age without respect and an end that would be welcome because it would be the end.”
    That means a lot to me.
    This is the story of old Mr Head and his grandson Nelson, a young boy, a naive and forthright boy, who insists – when Mr Head takes him on a train trip to the city where Nelson was born – that he had visited there twice, even if it was once when a baby.
    The wide-eyed, trusting boy has not seen ‘niggers’ before and the whole trip becomes ike Dante’s trip into Hell, symbolised directly by the sewers under ground and the almost human moon looking down, and it all begins to be more about Mr Head’s shame and mercy, guilt and grace, as at one point he disowns Nelson. As with AIckman, there are disarming strangenesses, like an artificial ‘nigger’ in a garden that also has a birdbath, a telling ‘objective correlative’, as this story continues to resonate with much dark innuendo and with lessons for all times, not only theirs.
    Synchronously, I read this morning an academic essay on HP Lovecraft’s attitude to race as seen in his fiction, from the book I am currently reviewing HERE, where this quote from HPL’s article on his love for cats is given: “I have no active dislike for dogs, any more than I have for monkeys, human beings, negroes, cows, sheep, or pterodactyls.” (‘Cats and Dogs’) I cannot help but think again of Enoch and the Gorilla…
  19. GOOD COUNTRY PEOPLE
    “If science is right, then one thing stands firm: science wishes to know nothing of nothing.”
    And even those of us who say they believe, believe in nothing, I guess. One of the most horrific stories I have ever read. The ending is of hindsight horror and of what names and intentions truly hide. An absolutely devastating scene. Begins as a story of gradually well-characterised Joy/Hulga Hopewell. With a wooden leg, about thirty years old, with a degree. Meets the Bible Salesman, Manley Pointer. A story about names and aliases. And alliances of trust and incipient, almost child-like beginnings of sex between adults. And the ultimate chat-up line: where does the wooden leg join to you? About innocence and knowingness. A bit of both in each of them. I expect this story will resonate with me for years to come, assuming I still have such years to come between the two nothingnesses that are not me.
  20. YOU CAN’T BE ANY POORER THAN THE DEAD
    Young Francis Marion Tarwater buries someone important to Francis, an old great uncle who took him away from some under uncle or his nephew who once made. secret ‘peeping tom’ study paper upon the old uncle. Yes, it’s complicated, but so simple, too, utterly poignant and naive and strangely disarming, with ever-developing characterisations, tensions and ties, and a stranger who is Francis’ new-born interlocutor of a self when he digs deeper and deeper but not deep enough, until he finds the old man’s liquor (elsewhere) and leaves him half-unburied for some passing Negro to bury instead.
    So simple, yet full of complex wisdom – or vice versa.
    Don’t lose your hat to the traffic of sadness and stoicism flowing below somewhere…
    another reluctant visit to the city, this time finding no ‘artificial nigger’? Just finding himself at last, these few unburied years later.
    To the sound of ‘screaking’ words…
    “I never ast for no fill. I never ast to come at all. I’m here before I knew this here was here.”
    “‘I’m going to move that fence,’ Tarwater said. ‘I ain’t going to have my fence in the middle of a field.'”
    “His cheekbones protruded, narrow and thin like the arms of a cross, and the hollows under them had an ancient look as if the child’s skeleton beneath were as old as the world.”
    “…you couldn’t sell a copper flue to a man you didn’t love.”
    Like that salesman I mark these stories with my own versions of ‘cancer’ and ‘dead’ appended as aide-mémoires or real-time reviews.
  21. GREENLEAF
    “The sky was crossed with thin red and purple bars and behind them the sun was moving down slowly as if it were descending a ladder.”
    I was destined to read for the first time, I guess, this story about a Mrs May a few days after another Mrs May was made Prime Minister of my country. This story’s Mrs May is a farmer. I ain’t going to work on Maggie’s Farm No More. Maggie May. She has dreams of being eaten from the farm outside, through the wall, towards her own heart, as a precursor of something else entering her heart at the end, when someone speaks into an ear that is not her ear, but which ear was which, I ask! Those the eating never reaches are the Greenleaf family, Mr Greenleaf who has worked for her with the cattle some time, but she merely puts up with his inefficiency as a habit, and Mrs Greenleaf who does prayer healing with scandal newspaper clippings she buries in the ground, his five daughters, and his two sons ET and OT Greenleaf (“‘They never quarls,’ the boy said. ‘They like one man in two skins.'”), and the Greenleafs’ Negro who buys insurance, I guess, from one of Mrs May’s own two sons, sons whom she knows will marry trash, and she almost wishes they’d been switched for the Greenleaf boys. Anyway, a stray bull needs getting rid of, but this is something never got rid of till the end, a prevailing bullicose force that typifies the inchoate jigsaw of emotions of raw humanity that also prevails. The sun becomes a burning bullet…
    [I sense this whole book has that stray bull roaming throughout it, out to eat its way towards the author.]
  22. A VIEW OF THE WOODS
    “Every morning since she had been able to climb, he had waked up to find her either on his bed or underneath it. It was apparent that this morning she preferred the sight of the woods.”
    I think it is safe to say that this story has the most shocking ending I have ever encountered. it is a striking portrait of the relationship between his nine year old granddaughter and himself the old man – his need for his Fortune name to hers, too, to bear out her resemblance to him.
    He witnesses her father, his son-in-law, a man who is the Pitts not the Fortune, beating her with a belt. But who truly betrays whom? No town planning those days allows the granddad to plan for a filling station on the front lawn where she and the other children usually play. His motives are fine, he feels. but it will affect the view, she says, her view of the woods. What’s a tree, what’s a pine? A moral: that importance to a feisty girl is not necessarily important to her granndad, who has a belt round his waist, too. A digger in the clay pits. Some fine characterisations of relationship, and the sun as blood drenching the trees, inchoate and often gratuitous. Utterly, utterly devastating. Strangely uplifting, too?
    “All the way into town, she sat looking at her feet, which stuck out in front of her, encased in heavy brown school shoes. The old man had often sneaked up on her and found her alone in conversation with her feet and he thought she was speaking with them silently now.”
  23. ae49736f4cae8dc080c029fc36b3d702THE ENDURING CHILL
    “…a death whose meaning had been far beyond the twittering group around them.”
    “‘Here’s Doctor Block,’ she said as if she had captured the angel on the rooftop and brought him to her little boy.”
    Asbury Porter Fox, once her little boy, now in his early twenties, returns home in ill health and ill-spoken – says he’s dying – his sister is scornful, his well-intentioned mother bringing in, against his wishes, his childhood Doctor called Block, a version of a Ligottian Doctor, I feel, but Asbury has outgrown him.
    This is an extremely powerful story of Asbury’s thrashing around figuratively and mentally – not necessarily to prevent his own death but to fulfil it, meeting those Negroes again with whom he used to smoke and drink unpasteurised milk, also appealing to the saviour power of Literature and Art with specific reference to Kafka, Yeats and Joyce, but then relenting against his own atheism to call in priests, then leaving a recriminatory letter for his mother as a posthumous revenge… And we wonder if the huge bird with the icicle is a gestalt of all these things and more, as he meets the end of this story, perhaps of himself. Utterly life-changing stuff for the reader.
  24. THE COMFORTS OF HOME
    “It was an inheritance from the old man, whose opinion it had been that every house should contain a loaded gun.”
    And so it was, and so it still is.
    The relentlessly grinding presence of the gobby slut, called Star Drake aka Sarah Ham, brought into the house by his do-gooding mother, pervades this story of Thomas as ill-spoken to his mother as Asbury was in the previous story,,,,
    The slut squats in the house as much as his own father squats inside Thomas himself.
    Sheriff Farebrother is called in to deal with the final nightmarish tableau that ensues, even if he gets the wrong end of the plot’s stick. LIfe is never fair, life has forces that grow twisted.
  25. ae49736f4cae8dc080c029fc36b3d702EVERYTHING THAT RISES MUST CONVERGE
    “‘With the world in the mess it’s in,’ she said, ‘it’s a wonder we can enjoy anything. I tell you, the bottom rail is on the top.'”
    A combination hilarity and a serious reflection of the times are a changing with regard to race relations in America (1961 when this story was published). Another son and mother relationship, so utterly flannery, here with mutual embarrassment and feisty conflict of outdoing each other, and he escorts her in her truly outlandish hat on the bus to her reducing class, with all her prejudices shown to the negroes on the way, including a black woman in not a similar hat but an identical one! But the mother’s condescending over-compensation transpires, something which seems worse than the original prejudice. A switching of sons, seats and hats and a crosswire of eyes that goggle bigger than the text, bulging out, one of them lying on the page like a cancer, or is that my imagination over-compensating for the onset of social justice warriors that followed on in our own equally messy world? We ever should strive to strike exactly the right note. And this story’s title, the mother’s ab reductio class notwithstanding, is exactly that well-tempered note, I suggest.
    And don’t ask to borrow an ice-breaking match from your match-in-humanity especially when both these things apply: you don’t smoke and you are in a no smoking area.
  26. THE PARTRIDGE FESTIVAL
    “Feature by feature, he brought the face together in his mind and each time he had it almost constructed, it fell apart and he was left with nothing.”
    A man, called a boy, called Calhoun, in his early twenties, visits his two aunts for the Azalea Festival. Gun crime prevailed then as now, a serial killing in one fell swoop by a man called Singleton, having been imprisoned for not buying a Festival badge, he shoots dead six of those who put him away, including someone unworthy of being buried with the other five. Calhoun and a girl called Mary Elizabeth blow up the image of Singleton into one worthy of almost idolising as a victim, made to do what he did, like today’s Jihadists, half foreign, it is mooted, half Christian, as a surrogate Muslim for their day? Locked up with a goat. They want to write him up, actually see him…size him up for heroism.
    The ending is shocking when they do see him in the prison, a madman’s crude exposure as a message for our times? No, it is something far more oblique and ungraspable. You may need to remember this story and see that Singleton’s seeds grow backward in time from now? Calhoun’s barber’s now on Facebook.
    The relationship, meanwhile, between Calhoun and Mary Elizabeth is memorably etched. No beauty contest.
    Feature by feature, a gestalt that is Trump?
  27. THE LAME SHALL ENTER FIRST
    “‘Your shoe,’ he said eagerly, ‘today is the day to get your shoe!’ Thanks God for the shoe!”
    This probably is the most wedged-together outcome of a plot’s leitmotifs – with the telescope, the imminent moon travel by humanity at the time it was written, the microscope, too, as well as the father’s wife, his boy’s mother, dead and up amid the stars somewhere on some freak of religion or falsehood – the most inevitable outcome into which this book’s leitmotifs have so far cohered. And it becomes even more devastating as a result. This book has a number of no-gooders that people care for, while hoping to make life better for these no-gooders, as well as a sense of self-satisfaction for the do-gooders themselves.
    The father, here, do-gooding to the detriment of his own son, brings in a difficult, garbage-eating youth, a youth who admits to being controlled by Satan in an attempt to prove his right to be what he is, a youth with a club foot. Kindness is cruel, and events fall out of shape amid a complexity of motives, of guilt, shame, yearning, a perfect storm of emotions that you will find nowhere but in Flannery.
    Reaching from the end of the story, retrocausally: an eye that lists, a first and final flight into space by the father’s son to hang by a star, the youth’s accusations of immoral attentions from the father, “the halt’ll be gathered together”, the pink can, Leola’s corset, Noah’s ark, the flower seeds that started it all…
    This is another major example of the short story form, one that is gathered and honed to cut you deep.
  28. WHY DO THE HEATHEN RAGE?
    A four page story, the shortest Flannery story by a long way. Yet, it has defeated me, with its complexity of resonances. I feel I am both the father who has suffered the stroke as well as his son Walter, as a palimpsest. This large section from it seems to encapsulate today’s social media and my religion of literature, to encapsulate this dreamcatching itself… and, for once, you need to read the story as a whole, to see the gestalt for yourself. It will only take you ten minutes to read, but last a lifetime in afterthought.
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  29. REVELATION
    “‘They ought to send all them niggers back to Africa,’ the white-trash woman said. ‘That’s wher they come from in the first place.'”
    Mrs Turpin and her Jesus-given husband Claud in a doctor’s waiting-room, a room too small for those waiting. We are all waiting I guess. Where I live on the coast of North East Essex is called God’s waiting-room… But, back then, in the Flannery day, people spoke out to each other about the various classes and colours, a complexity that was developing between trash and good, bad and black, or other permutations, and the hair-trigger emotions of the mad and the ugly. One girl calls Mrs T a wart-hog and later Mrs T tends to her pigs, and a vision of all the bad and the good, the pretty and the ugly, the white and the black, reach up to Heaven from where Jesus, if you dare speak it aloud, first created us as what we are, either making us what we are gratuitously or by deliberation of love He felt and/or didn’t feel?
    I then thought that, when sculpted in raw grey stone, white trash is the same colour as black goodness, ugly or pretty, mad or sane, or any permutations to that effect.
    “Amen! You des as sweet and pretty as you can be.”
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  30. PARKER’S BACK
    “The first thing Parker saw were his shoes, quickly being eaten by the fire; one was caught under the tractor, the other was some distance away, burning by itself.”
    The story of Obadiah Elihue Parker and Sarah Ruth Cates, the former who crams his body with arabesques of tattoos, panthers, hawks, cobras et al. An obsession but only when he can see them without a mirror, until, to transcend a tractor accident and regain the love of Sarah, he obtains a meticulously detailed Byzantine Christ on his back… Idolatry or sheer bravado? You will see. A vanity of vanities or an act of being marked to die? This is a powerful burning vision stymied between the inchoate emotions of human beings in love and in hate, beings adrift in some motive force, be it God’s or that of something even worse. A ‘rapture’ “as transparent as the wing of a fly.”
    Another waiting-room. Another burning shoe. A burning ark that holds us all, of whatever breed?
  31.     JUDGEMENT DAY
    “He would have been a nigger’s white nigger any day.”
    The cleverest story of them all, I guess, the mid-twentieth century American complexity of pecking orders as black with black, white with black, white with white. Actor with preacher. Father with daughter. flannery2
    This father was not so much a Robinson Crusoe in his Southern shack with a Man Friday, but also with some version of not Friday but Flannery, a woman writer, of course. Her character is this father, a grizzled oldster taken to New York after whittling bark into glassless spectacles for his Man Friday, just for that honest connection between human and human, whatever the colour, whatever the pecking order. And then the feisty father and daughter relationship, like those earlier ones between other pecking orders, like mother and son several times over. The daughter imports him to New York in some misplaced duty of care. He wants to be buried back where he came from, and now eventually stuck in the New York banisters, he dreams of Judgement day, upon the opening of his box forwarded by train to the station back south, except he sees, not Man Friday, but the black actor preaching nothing but nothing beyond death. Utterly poignant, utterly telling, oblique as well as clear. Every move we make in life just a click away from the wrong one – or from the right one. This last story should have ended with a musical ‘dying fall’, but instead it was a rare ‘dying rise’.
    A perfect book, one to resurrect from.

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Monday, August 01, 2016

The Hidden Back Room by Jason A. Wyckoff

The Hidden Back Room by Jason A. Wyckoff

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My previous review of a Jason A. Wyckoff book HERE.
Tartarus Press 2016 (my previous reviews of this publisher’s books linked from HERE.)
I intend to real-time review this collection in a week or so, and when I do, my comments will appear in the thought stream below.

18 thoughts on “The Hidden Back Room by Jason A. Wyckoff

  1. THE HIDDEN BACK ROOM
    “We wouldn’t want to put too much on his plate.”
    This, I reckon, mis-echoes deliberately the pattern of ‘The Hospice’ by Robert Aickman, where it starts with a car that needs mending (the protagonist takes it to a garage recommended by a fellow worker whom he doesn’t know well) and while waiting visits, through heavy rain, the Restaurant opposite where they have plates that are already empty rather than too full. But that gives you no real clue as to the accretive ‘disarming strangeness’ and oblique objective-correlatives of this narrative. The mis-skewed series of doors that one palms open or needs to negotiate like revolving doors and a slowly descending chandelier (a combination of ‘All Fools and Horses’ and ‘Fawlty Towers’?) – again all this gives you no real clue as to the disturbing power of this absurdist work, and I haven’t yet covered for you the nature of the characters he meets in that restaurant! I will leave you discover those for yourself. The spiders, too. And more.
    (The slow motion descent of the chandelier is in tune with the likely slow motion nature of this real-time review (very slow-motion indeed) although this first story has given me a positive spur towards a speedy engagement with the second story, but at the moment I am inundated with books all of which I anticipate relishing in real-time, each book slowing down the others. Such is life.)
    “A woman sang in a foreign language over a jazz trio, drizzling honey into the spaces between bass and piano.”
  2. TANOROAR
    “Did you save yourself?”
    For months now, I have had a troublous thing on my neck, which was removed a couple of days ago and I am still recovering from that gory minor operation, but having now read this, I am both disturbed and relieved! A striking story, in the middle of nowhere, that starts with a car breaking down (cf my comparison to ‘The Hospice’ above), and we are gradually led into the type of story where presumably ordinary people meet with strange behaviour from locals, here a well-characterised married couple finding themselves among country inbreeds, a curt man, deformed boy and some young women having a mix of colluding with or fearing the arrival of a priapic Minotaur….
    Somehow, for me, this compelling story is constructively reminiscent of John Langan-type bullicose fiction but has its own unique take upon the collusive nature of this Minotaur and its accoutrements that you may never forget.
  3. GUT PUNCH
    “I squirm as that oppressive ‘limbo’ sensation thickens the air between stucco and low-pile.”
    This story IS a gut punch, as well as being about one. The male narrator offered to be tucked in by his Joseph whom he also wants to involve once the catharsis or purging point is reached by the end, although involvement is often more a contaminant that hides all other contaminants, even hiding itself, “a man whom no cigar is just a cigar.” He blames his mother for his sexuality, but is that anything for anyone to be blamed? This GREAT story has, for me, the literary traction of some American writers that I have read in recent years, John Updike, Philip Roth, Truman Capote, Flannery O’Connor, reaching a psychic apotheosised Aickman more like HP Lovecraft…. A terrifying vision of a close-encounters sort of indoor mountain built into or by his past and current hang-ups, a Lovecraftian monster as well as a mountain of madness. You will not believe how this story develops so powerfully, the relationship of the narrator with his mother (a relationship that is the crux of everything here), his return to the tawdry town where he grew up, revisiting the church where the people ask after his mother, and his mother’s unshrinking shrink who entices him back, along with his mother, to the actual house where he lived as a child with her… a male shrink.
    Any review of this work needs thus to tail off without definition so that you can start it on a sober, shockable footing, assuming you haven’t read it before and thus already gut-punched.
  4. ON BALANCE
    “Finally, I was exasperated by the very weight of the decision.”
    Legal judges sometimes, when clinching evidence is unavailable, need to judge on where the weight is in a balance of probabilities. I judge this story is a metaphor for my own seeking of a gestalt, whether subtle, preternatural or obvious, whenever I conduct a real-time review of a fiction work or a series of fiction works in a single book, obsessed as I am, with the fruits of my own pareidolia and apophenia. I am convinced, too, that this story will haunt me, come what may, just as the metal-detector-wielding beachcomber’s discard of a metal cup haunts the narrator over years of his routine life’s commuting and fighting to maintain his own diffidence against the onset of coincidences regarding that cup. I have never before read a work about a person’s agonising over the value of diffidence, and here it is portrayed convincingly amid recurrences of discarding, initiation, disquiet, and a need for a clinching closure, but such passionate-diffidence (an oxymoron?) is a human emotion that needs treating, and here we have it at last, I suggest. Meanwhile, the name ‘Donna Louise’ (embossed on the cup), for example, will now nag at me until I solve it by means of my on-going reading of this book. And if not found directly in this book, I will seek that closure elsewhere, I guess.
  5. THE RAIN-DIRTY VALLEY
    “She walked with the steady indifference he had seen seen displayed by the woman on the path.”
    They keep on coming!
    Another treatment of diffidence in the shape of a scenario that, for me, blends Flannery O’Connor with the Twilight Zone. I infer a protagonist named Nathan who is black, having dithered for some years, with a studied diffidence, the woman he loves and who may love him but now she is marrying someone else, CharISE, her name, like a similar dithering as with the previous story’s Donna LouISE cup. As a metaphor for his diffidence, perhaps, Nathan takes a journey to Charise’s wedding reception … In his car that breaks down like cars tend to do in this book! A spooky fog engulfs him, and the text is good on the various natures of fog in general, this a cloying, emotional fog, whence evolves a stage set town, to the tune of his own jazz music (music significant, here, as it was in this book’s first story), and people conjured by that town and then acting to fit those emotions and those people conjuring or cloying others, potentially HIM. Who the playthings, who the urchin kids you orphaned in this fog-locked town? Who the living, who the ghosts? Almost a sentimental slow-motion. A telling ending, too, for this remarkable work. A little touch of Harry in the night, to quote someone.
  6. THE HOMUNCULUS IN THE CURIO
    “You were much closer to non-life when you were eight than now when you are eighty.”
    … building, as I do, long and longer queues of books to real-time review so as to extend real-time itself, perhaps forever, “as always, kept busy on your path.”
    This pungent, well-bellied, old man has civilised trans-Cartesian conversations with the homunculus in the curio, the one he had created or captured like a hostage from grave-wax. They talk about eschatology, existentialism, Stockholm Syndrome. magic, faerie, ley-lines, in “languid whimsy”, “desultory”, of “affable peculiarity”, and dare I say there is a paradoxically diffident determination by the agent to bring magic into the principal’s dying existence. A decided poignancy, and a special theatrical quality, a dialogue similar, I guess, to Waiting for Godot, giving this work the potential for being classicised, if not classified.
    1. A BLOOD WITHOUT BLOOD
      “I could not even trace a larger rhythm born of mania; despite the apparent obsession fuelling its builder, there appeared to be no consideration as to how each section might relate to the whole,…”
      Which is just how I feel about my own gestalt real-time reviews, but more a mania than an obsession.
      I am glad this article-writer left its “lede” intact, and did not remove it nor just tell the meat of the story straight; after all, his lede is, for me, a fine literarily textured treatise on writing such articles about the eccentric collector or constructor, and it gives a feel of his own participation in this most fateful one of his writing career, even if he didn’t in the end dare write it for his editor. Of course, it goes without saying that the meat of the story starts with a sputtering car…
      The collector-constructor is one who accretes found art, and I love found art, especially the stuff I find in the Tate Gallery or other museums of extreme modern art. Which brings me back to the whole gamut of being a Dreamcatcher or Hawler amongst the mainframes, axles and bumpers of literature. It is as if his car was attracted to the found auto art created organically and fatefully-by-its-approximation-to-Death that was, in a different time and place, to be written up in the protagonist’s article about the found auto art and its ‘artist’. That very ‘attraction’ of metal magnetising metal over time and space pervades this remarkable text to its very end, factored into by the statistics of car accidents.
      The text’s description of the found art pile-up proves, by the way, to be stunning.
  7. THE DREAMS OF PALE NIGHT
    “Her criticisms of her son, justified as she felt they were, pricked at her until feelings bloomed both of fondness and of protective worry, each fuelling the other in turn. ‘What am I supposed to do about him?’ she whispered.”
    This tantalising novelette fills me with memories of childhood’s waking dreams, like watching a beam of light managing to find its way into the canopied darkness of my bedroom and my fearing its passage worse than any monster, or having to leave the canopy of my existence and meeting giants outside of it, maybe become one of those giants myself. I don’t know where to begin. Alaska? Some alternate or fantasy Alaska? Hosea, a gawky lad, due to become gawkier, and we are told allusively of his “desultory” ditherings to leave the canopy’s commune, by deviousness leaving his feisty relationship with his mother or the semen-stained fumblings with his girl Hannah. I was particularly taken with what I shall call the hawling of the tarp canopy, a prime example of my own hawling or dreamcatching, and you will need to go far to find such an off-the-wall obsession with keeping the canopy intact at night from those stray beams of light. The small upside-down trees. The dreadful or hopefully not dreadful but dreamful fate of his mother, amid those tangled trees. And the lackadaisical fate for Hannah who continues her life with a husband and children, and with her only being able to see Hosea out of the corner of her eye. The beehives. The charms of finding gold in the river or the lucky charm of having a crystal around the neck. The seeking of an entrance into the head as dome or skull or canopy – via the nostrils? – like ever trying to find this book’s hidden back room there. An engaging group of characters all on the edge of something they need to transcend. The reader, included.
    “…these people locked in tradition, united by belief.”
  8. THE HOUSE ON NORTH CONGRESS STREET
    “I have wondered since if ghosts are able to avail themselves of those optical illusions wherein they seem to appear.”
    This text of personal narrativizing is high on the graduations of the eerie. It is a student’s compulsively structured agonising, even dithering, with the concept of the haunted house and of ghosts while he is staying at an address with this reputation. The eventual haunting he experiences feels real to me – and you can’t often say that about fiction stories as I presume this is. It depends upon a fabrication of this book’s previous found art, here random objects in a bedroom, dreamcatching or hawling them into a gestalt, and then the gestalt autonomously turns into a ghost. This is extrapolated beyond the preterite of his pre-internet student days into the Internet days proper – where substantiation is available on-line (if that is not a contradiction in terms). Genuinely creepy as a hidden back room,
  9. DETAILS
    This seems to be the synaesthesic apotheosis of this book’s theme of agonising or “wistful” or diffident pareidolia-apophenia towards a gestalt of some haunted fate or rarefied state of existence. It takes a while to grow into the narrator of ‘Details’ wherein the or a devil resides. Via an overheard casual conversation of easy racism, a sense of superhuman power, recurrent meetings with someone called Roger (as if some call signal of goodbye), a rock music earworm, and a ceiling-fan growing closer like this book’s earlier chandelier – and the first time I’ve seen ‘deadpan’ used as a verb.
    ‘Intent as nine-tenths of the law’, which brings me back to my lifelong interest in Wimsatt’s Intentional Fallacy with regard to dreamcatching or hawling literature like this book’s literature. The narrator and myself both fulfilling the role of the classic jinx? Just begging for that sinkhole of wrongness to open up beneath me…
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    • Also compare with how I started my review of ‘On Balance’ above: “Legal judges sometimes, when clinching evidence is unavailable, need to judge on where the weight is in a balance of probabilities.”
  10. COMFORTIDOR
    “The ‘disconnect’ between the creature’s existence and the problem its body heat created was obvious…”
    You know, this is an unquestionably remarkable and ground-breaking collection of stories, each story working stoically, morosely, moribundly, acceptingly, assimilatingly, dawdlingly, goadingly, intrepidly, aspergically, for the gestalt of the whole in which each shares. As does Davis in this particular story. If the previous story was some form of this quest’s apotheosis, this one is its dragon in the lowest basement of all. Another homunculus in the curio with whom to chew the fat, or dowse the water. Davis, on another level, is the stoical worker in the Ligottian Corporation, but Ligotti works in different, more diluted office politics. Nothing can touch the Wyckoff version in this story, I contend. It is sheer diffident bravado, as we follow the path of Davis trying to transcend the heating problems of the office building and the leg or is it log of the foot where the hot-blooded office workers work, and ends up burning the log – the one he once had aspirations to sculpt into a new shape – onto his own fireplace at home. This story deserves a trophy, or at least a metal cup. Its determination of “decrescendo” is the optimum. The pessimum, too.
  11. IN THE LIBRARY
    “It had a reversed L-shape, running tall north-south, with a second shorter leg turning right from the top.”
    They keep on coming. Well, this one sort of comes on its own, a potential future classic for those who love the generic Weird tale, the Horror story or Ghost story, including, but not exclusively, the Lovecraftian – as well as something special that makes this story its own backstory, its own hidden back room, implicit with the frightening ceiling that’s planted above it, like a psychological or spiritual chandelier or fan, an insectoid-human intertwining of text with the dragon or demon inside your own unvented stomach. Yes, I feel this story IS a classic, and does not need yet to become one.
    At first, I thought it was exploratory by the protagonist of a haunted building like Danielewski’s HOUSE of Leaves, one that perhaps was never written, one that I just imagined reading, triangulating – as we do alongside the protagonist – the historical backstory of the building, its library and secret room, a literal House of LEAVES with its books. And then triangulating its frightening implications, its aftermath and its future beyond this book.
    On a personal note, I sensed this work as an extrapolation of the Nemonymous from the Weirdmonger side of me. As if my thousand plus published fictions before 1999 were the inferior insects that gave birth to the bigger and better ones in Wyckoff. (Even his name seems apposite!) The essence of Nemonymity…. ‘The Familiar’ I never then knew I had.
    “On not a single novel in that library did I find the conjunction used for attribution, either on the cover, the spine, or the frontispiece — never was a book ‘by’ someone.”
  12. LES OMBRES CHINOISES
    “In a propitious Sunday matinee, Laurence Olivier had taught her to smoke only when the moment required the affectation, and to always discard the cigarette emphatically after no more than five puffs.”
    Although this seems to be the book’s penultimate story, I am treating it tentatively as the charmingly diffident coda. A genius loci, ceiling and chandelier et al, of a basement theatre and a shadow play shadowing another shadow play, the relationship between a love-seasoned Sunset Boulevard type actress and her son, as they talk about the nature of the word ‘legendary’ pre-empted as it is by anyone legendary having to be in a fiction rather than real life, and about the difference between a love affair and a romance. And later, when alone, her slipping on of a neat number of a dress leading her to transcend time (but in which direction?) and become the artwork she always was or would be, meeting another woman as her self or soulmate amid a soirée with Erik Satie. I was rather taken aback that as I read this work a couple of hours ago, there was being broadcast by the BBC, live on its Radio 3, a cabaret of music and words celebrating the music of Erik Satie: http://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/b07m58xc !
    “The wish, if there was one, seemed more towards promoting her neglected health for its own sake, sans objective.”
  13. STRONGER THAN ALL STORMS
    “I left my car by the side of the road with a note saying I’d had engine trouble…”
    If a coda can have a coda, this relatively brief text is it. It’s the hidden back room beyond the hidden back room, not straddled by ceilings with chandeliers, but a roof as an active theatrical stage for a ‘found art’ ghost fixing it not while the sun shines but as a storm already rages.
    The narrator — involving himself in a dithering, diffident self-palliative care for cancer, carrying a deadly gun as its own fixing hammer — takes a solitary walk to where in a forest he can be lost even to the disease that chases him – but he finds instead a precarious abode with Aickman’s settled dust inside. And his log-lit smoke through the chimney is due to alert the the reader on the roof, a reader left with something at last to grasp – a life as a precious but expendable act of goodness that will outlast that reader who is anyone and everyone who triangulates, real-time reviews, hawls, dreamcatches such goodness from this fictively and luxuriantly stiff-paged and sturdy book I hold in my hand, a book, out of, not in, the library, one that will become dust, last of any of us, no doubt. Dust or “grabby mud.” A story where the car only pretended to have broken down, uncertain whether to self-start. The ultimate method acting.
    I read this story today, on a day that UK news is full of an item about cancer no longer being life-ending; it is now simply life-changing: http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/health-36925974
    The back room many of us carry with us. Including me.
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