Des Lewis - GESTALT REAL-TIME BOOK REVIEWS A FEARLESS FAITH IN FICTION — THE PASSION OF THE READING MOMENT CRYSTALLISED — Empirical literary critiques from 2008 as based on purchased books.
I first encountered paintings by Hammershøi (mentioned here) when I decided to collect images of women with their backs to us, started here in 2009: http://www.ligotti.net/showpost.php?p=31619&postcount=1 Meanwhile having read the first three pages of em-dash rarefied wordplay in this intriguing book – and with my having published the world’s first blank story in Nemonymous in 2002 – I wonder if black is actually more blank than white! Not thought before about that … nor about the black-blank word-assonance.
Short prose pieces with generous blank, non-black spaces below them, and, of course, between letters and words, too, but the close-ordered em-dashes keep these spaces to a cabin fever’s minimum—all this upon the edge of OuLiPo as an evocation of many shades of blackness. “the geometry of black rooms” has the feel of TODAY’s cabin fever!
Up to page 19
“—shielded in flesh—“
The whole of page 23 is taken up by…
[…]
And I would cross-refer you to the many fiction books of Rourke I have already praised in my gestalt real-time reviewing linked at the head of this web page.
Page 22: “—drenched with connections—“
Sorry, I somehow quoted that wrongly. It should be: “—drenched—with connections—“
My constant lockdown view….
We’re primarily still concerned with recovering bodies, and we hope we find them in that big section of fuselage, but don’t everybody think that this is going to happen… —Robert Francis
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Up to page 29 “—fuselage through a window pane—“
This is such strange book! You may quote me on that.
“—you’d never felt ‘blackness like this before’—“
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“Take out the glass eye, unscrew the legs, the arms. Remove the wig, the teeth, the silver plate in the skull, the tubes in the anus and abdomen, and just climb into bed and wait for summer.” — Lawrence Durrell, The Black Book
In the tube journey up to page 34, a number, for many reasons, important to my mother who was born in Walthamstow and I seem to travel from that very station with “corrupted lungs […] through darkness towards complete blackness—“
Page 35
I am so far intrigued with a numbered series headed VANTABLACK, here no. 8 “—black in black—like a—colour so black it makes—black seem tame—“ Just an extract. Book that somehow makes book seem tame.
As well as a numbered Vantablack series, there is a lettered Francesca Woodman series, it seems. Many art exhibitions that started recently had their footfall aborted, the now sadly quarantined galleries, except one beneficial spin-off is that they have produced a wonderful series of different monologues of people going round such footfaded exhibitions on BBC4 TV. Every blackness has a salver lining?
Up to page 41
There now seems to be a new series with episodes denoted by Roman numerals, a series headed “—the geometry of black shells according to wikipedia—“ This is mind-fazing Em Dash OuLiPo that does not flatten today’s curve but möbiuses it.
Up to page 45
This includes algebraic or acronymic footnotery amid the em dashes, outdoing OuLiPo at its own game of blackening stuff with squashed insects as semantics, graphology, mouthed phonemes, upon an otherwise white page of assumed poetic syntactics.
Page 49
The blank story I mentioned earlier above was entitled ‘4’33”’…
“—the echo of concrete—taking it deep—into the lungs—“
There is something very poignant about that. The em dashes as indrawn breaths.
If the em dashes are generally meant to denote the many takings of breath, they denote extreme breathlessness indeed throughout the book, and sporadic insertions of […] to denote… to denote what?
Up to page 62
“—Beckett’s silence is blackness in silence in silence in blackness—“
And the reference to ‘Hades black‘, a reference to the poet named Shade in Pale Fire?
Page 63 “—light of snow—doesn’t speak of—whiteness—but a—dark—dark” A death on Christmas Day in 1956. Beyond even his own Microscripts.
Page 65
“—‘the desire to run from one thing—or state of being—and be—absorbed into another’—can it ever be—undone—“
That seems to be the crux of our essential dilemma today, precisely today, as we await this weekend’s announcement by a buffoon about our loosening lockdown destiny…
Up to Page 67
And a long movingly short-breathed passage about a person referred to by ‘she’ and ‘her’, and her ability to echo our blackness, amid the tower blocks and doom of the city and, I infer, amid the Gestalt Tardis of our innerdividual or covidual lockdowned bodies and other vertically aligned nanotube arrays.
Up to page 70
“—as black as shellac—“
Then, I note another series denoted by a., b… I also now note a. was hidden in plain sight at the beginning of this book, before the em dash punctuated breathing started. And now we have b., a series depicting the drawbacks in trying to ‘own a colour as a thing’… as I try to own this book about black? Steal it from its author? Live off its back like a blackacle?
I have had a long run at reading this today, having been figuratively semi-released in the Government’s world from a sort of blackdown. Though being over 70, I am unsure. They called such a blackdown by the word blackout in the last War. Yet this still is today “only blackness”, although it strives to be a period piece, because there are people in pubs here, if absorbed by Guinness. Yet here we have truly powerful em dashery of crowblack, poemblack dash-divided lines as a theme and variations upon the tactile and spiritual and genius-loci and wordsources and dribbleslutch of the Thames, being another numbered series up to (17) stemming from this river’s source at the Chivers book. St Paul’s et al. Did the Chivers firm ever make black jelly? The darkest was more purple than black I recall, even though it had BLACKcurrant in it. Did lockjawed Corona bottles ever have black fizz? The darkest was probably fizzy Dandelion and Burdock. Which brings me back to Guinness, that darkest of all spiritually dark drinks with a creamy head, preferably, for me, as cold as the Thames water in that 1963 Winter I recall so well. Under milkwood, under milkstout.
I hope the author will forgive me showing the whole of this section….
Up to page 105 “—-black made up of things black—“ “—it’s vulgar—“
Up to end
“—completely black—the cars have—all gone now—“
This section, if not the whole book, is a staggering prophecy of blackdown or lockdown and its accoutrements and causes. Covivid, covidual (not individual, as in Jungian) and lucid dreaming, too. And em dash breaths between coughs? I see the book was first published on 17 January 2020!
“—when communication is finally switched off—“
“—‘voices shovelled away into heaps guttural—like phlegm—coughed up—spat—out’—“
I first encountered paintings by Hammershøi (mentioned here) when I decided to collect images of women with their backs to us, started here in 2009: http://www.ligotti.net/showpost.php?p=31619&postcount=1
Meanwhile having read the first three pages of em-dash rarefied wordplay in this intriguing book – and with my having published the world’s first blank story in Nemonymous in 2002 – I wonder if black is actually more blank than white! Not thought before about that … nor about the black-blank word-assonance.
“the geometry of black rooms” has the feel of TODAY’s cabin fever!
“—drenched—with connections—“
—Robert Francis
“—fuselage through a window pane—“
— Lawrence Durrell, The Black Book
“—black in black—like a—colour so black it makes—black seem tame—“
Just an extract. Book that somehow makes book seem tame.
Every blackness has a salver lining?
This is mind-fazing Em Dash OuLiPo that does not flatten today’s curve but möbiuses it.
“—light of snow—doesn’t speak of—whiteness—but a—dark—dark”
A death on Christmas Day in 1956. Beyond even his own Microscripts.
I also now note a. was hidden in plain sight at the beginning of this book, before the em dash punctuated breathing started. And now we have b., a series depicting the drawbacks in trying to ‘own a colour as a thing’… as I try to own this book about black? Steal it from its author? Live off its back like a blackacle?
“—-black made up of things black—“
“—it’s vulgar—“
I see the book was first published on 17 January 2020!