Wednesday, March 09, 2016

Theaker's Quarterly Fiction #54

Theaker Quarterly Fiction #54

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Details of TQF #54: HERE
Cover Artwork above : Howard Watts
My previous reviews of TQF: HERE
My real-time review of this issue’s fiction will appear below in the thought stream to this post.
A novella by Patrick Whittaker and a story by Charles Wilkinson.

16 thoughts on “Theaker Quarterly Fiction #54

  1. THE POLICEMAN AND THE SILENCE by Patrick Whittaker

    1. EXTERMINATION
    A crisp, funny account so far of Detective Seth Norton as a nattering jack himself, a mix of raincoated Columbo or someone else I can’t quite grasp, but I am not an expert on Detective fiction. However, I was preternaturally pleased that it seems to be a murder whodunnit bearing in mind my current reading and reviewing of other offthewall undunnits here with the Father Brown stories, with their own murders seeming to be both funny and serious-brutal, as well as thought-provoking or tricksy, and this Whittaker version seems to be a search for a solution to some sort of Ripper murder cases, but within an intriguing decimalised Alternate World (Kaza-Blanka) where LSD (money) and feet-inches seem to be creeping in from outside, and a hunter watch from an unknown place called Switzerland….
    I don’t intend to be the Revelator of any more spoilers in future stabs at cutting this text, assuming the above revelations are undetected spoilers that I have already released, but the body found in this chapter has headbits like mah-jong bits scattered, and probably solves the whole case because he seems to be the Ripper himself, murdered. End of story. We’ll see. Or you won’t see unless you read the novella itself alongside me. My future comments will be devoted to unspooling moods while unspoiling them.
  2. 2. NAVIGATION
    “I detest brownstone.”
    “Tell me about it. I happen to live in one of these tenement blocks.”
    That’s our narrator Detective, Seth, answering a lady called Cora (a witness of the murder in question ) on a drive-around accretive sense of Kaza as a city being gathered by the reader, and I see why I have started a SLOW-motion review of this novella…
    “BUILDING FOR A BETTER KAZA, said a billboard. If the sign writer had been honest, he’d have added the word SLOWLY.”
    And I am already impressed with the slick texture of the style and the characterisation and Kaza’s genius loci, as well as the preternatural synchronicities, like this morning seeing Tag Heuer splattered all over the world news, a watch company from Switzerland withdrawing their sponsorship from some supposedly disgraced sports star, and the previous chapter also mentioned Tag Heuer, a name I don’t often encounter, but now twice in one day.
    Why do I like preternatural synchronicities? Because I am also a lover of the avant garde, its experimental literature. art and atonal music and I once published in 2002 the world’s first blank story (NB: (Kaza-)BLANKA) and the integrity of my own avant garde credentials has been shown here — and I love the sound of Cora’s act as ‘The Silence’ and the music she performs in such a role at the Cafe Voltaire….
    “Calling itself The Home of Performance Art, the Cafe Voltaire prided itself on hosting the edgiest shows in town. And by edgiest they clearly meant most pretentious.”
    Well, Seth thinks it’s pretentious, but I could not possibly comment. After all, I claim I am a living example of the Policeman and the Silence vis a vis the enforced silencing of plot spoilers, as I hinted earlier.
    Genuinely enthralled by this novella.
  3. 3. INTERROGATION
    “What was a poker doing in an apartment with no fireplace?”
    That’s the sort of clever question Father Brown asks, he being someone who can eventually solve the most existentially or surreally outrageous murders in the stories about his detective work. Here, however, it’s one of the other characters who asks it of this story’s detective! Seth is more keen to tell us about his collection of 78 records he keeps in his office at the nick and how he records interrogations on a reel-to-reel.
    Meanwhile, the thrust of the story proper keeps me page-turning, a thrust that is beyond the mere peripherals above that the demands of plot silence allow me to divulge.
  4. 4. INCARCERATION
    “The clock on the wall told me it was 9:90 – 10 minutes before the flight was due.”
    The story takes a digressive path – helping me to avoid spoiling the main plot – whereby Seth is sent to the airport to arrest a wanted man who is returning to Kaza-Blanka by a propellered aeroplane from Elsewhere.
    The interface between Elsewhere and Kaza-Blanka concerning dreams and memories – and demarcation lines between them – is fascinatingly told and I almost wish it would stop being a tangent and become the main thrust of the plot.
  5. 5. LIBATION
    “Everything in the place that wasn’t black and white seemed to be brown – the exception being the walls. They sported a shade of yellow I’ve seen nowhere else.”
    Not even Elsewhere?
    The first part of this book I have already read is now all dreams or memories, and I only have the possibly specious mini-reviews above to go on. It’s a new day for me as reader, but it is the end of the day for Seth as he takes a drink in his favourite bar, sees some breaking news relevant to this novella’s main plot on the bar’s TV and, as she later visits the bar, he again meets Cora, aka The Silence, who featured in that news report with reference to her ‘jubbers’ etc.
    I am now wondering if Father Brown is the best comparison to make with Seth. Not Sherlock Holmes as a better comparison, I suggest, nor Chandler, but possibly the detective in some of Poe’s stories… Hmmm. Rue Morgue? Carnacki? Or SQuinn?
    This continues to be wonderful stuff.
  6. 6. RELAXATION
    “‘So deep,’ I thought with admiration. ‘For a prostitute.'”
    Tis a Pity She Was a Whore, dude.
    Not the end of the day for Seth, after all, as he and Cora see a film at the cinema, and I enjoyed the haunting connections between the film they see with the dreams and memories of Elsewhere and now the Bridge of Sighs. A tinge of Christopher Priest’s Archipelago or a telling symbol of Alzheimer’s as its own island in our world?
  7. 7. FORNICATION
    “We strolled down the Rue Picasso. Turned left onto the Rue Duchamp which took us onto the Rue Escher. Halfway down the Rue Escher, the Rue Matisse began.”
    This is where Cora lives? Well, we did see her act in the Cafe Voltaire. Some intriguing artistic references here that build this novella even more substantively, and Cora’s character, too, including another reason why her performing name is The Silence.
    By the way, the world’s first blank story I think I told you about elsewhere above was entitled ‘4 minutes 33 seconds’ and I presume that would have been the same on a Kaza timepiece as well as in our world on a Tag Heuer watch.
  8. 8. DAMNATION
    “Another day, another murder.”
    So it’s Seth’s new day now. This is where I should have started reading this morning, if I wanted to parallel the book’s real-time with my own.
    Worth waiting for the appearance of “the fat coroner” – as an alter ego of the Fat Controller? A chapter full of smells including the residual one of Seth’s involvement in the previous chapter (!), as well as other smells of potential exterminating substances for an Exterminator if not the Revelator, and other confusing clues, but only confusing if I tried to spoil them by failing to explain them properly in this review rather than your reading this excellent novella for yourself whereby they should become UNconfused.
  9. 9. COGITATION
    10. RECREATION
    “Looking at the studies of Blanka was like looking at the world through a fractured crystal. They were a riot of straight lines, none of them vertical or horizontal. The buildings leaned towards the viewer. Perspective was mocked. Every surface clashed with every other surface, like randomly selected notes struck all at once on an out of tune piano.”
    Forgive me for quoting so much in one go but it seems a good taster of this section of the novella, where whodunnit-clues as to the angles or nature of murder weapons and their wounds rub shoulders with a whole panoply of philosophically Aesthetic matters. A Tabula Rasa or Undunnit?
    These matters do not interfere with the page-turning quality of the main plot thrust, though. Also I sense a murder chain rather than a single murder, or a murder tontine, while the characters of Seth and Cora, via Seth, continue to build substantively.
  10. 11. INVESTIGATION
    12. DERIVATIVES
    “Now put the fucking gun away or say goodbye to your love spuds.”
    The plot thickens. A strange expression to use. In fact ‘the plot attenuates’ may be a more fitting expression but one that becomes more crowded as we look across the attenuations of a White City worthy of John Howard fiction, viewed from a new setting where another murder has ensued, a building full of its own nod-and-a-wink contrivances and secrets, a nest of the privileged more akin to the Exterminator’s bugs than to people, which reminds me to mention that there is here at least a slight aura of the accretive insectoid construction of a genius loci akin to that of Leena Krohn’s ‘Tainaron’ or ‘Gold of Ophir’ that I happen to be synchronously reviewing.
    • With the introduction now of sculpture and its sculptor into the setting, I somehow have a nagging paranoia that I am myself the murderous culprit digging into the otherwise blank rock for its complex innards, an act of killing or spoiling being an unwelcome spin-off from dreamcatching?
  11. I may later delete the previous sub-entry.
    13. ALLEGATION
    14. SEDATION
    “When she looked at me, it was like there were a thousand people staring out through her eyes, all of them wanting to speak at once.”
    These are heady chapters where opium is said to smell ‘like the wings of burning angels” and silence in music, notes and silence in relativity (cf my earlier mention of 4’33”), becomes part of the book’s Aesthetic – with memory and death factored in.
    Utterly fascinating.
    Meanwhile, the main plot thrust takes its inevitable if unpredictable course.
  12. 15. REVELATION
    16. DESTINATION
    A perfect ending and if I told you whether it was a predictable or unpredictable ending for me then that might give the game away as to what that ending is before you get to it. Suffice to say it was perfect.
    I have now concluded that I was right when at the start I compared Seth Norton to Father Brown, however unlikely that seemed at the time. The nature of the denouement demands this conclusion.
    I hope you call tell that I have been incredibly impressed by this novella. At the time of my life and the nature of my current reading, it has been perfect. I only hope the characters and place do not vanish Elsewhere and that they continue in some fashion.
    “Its chord progressions are based on pi – 3.14159265359. At first, it sounds like crap, but once you tune into what’s going on and pick up the patterns, it both thrills and enthralls.”
  13. SEPTS by Charles Wilkinson

    “You should be careful how you name people. The results aren’t always what you expect.”
    Charles Wilkinson has become one of my favourite short story writers whom I first encountered in TQF a few years ago. His prose style is immaculate, but also redolent where redolence is required, resonant and diffuse, too, with the derelict landscape here of houses and villas in middle-class England, now gone to seed in some Alternate or Near Future world striated with the endemic Past, with post-holocaust events and inimical forces prevalent at the edges. Haunting and involving as we transcend the obliquity or accretion of this work’s time and place, with the women of seeming middle-class memory meeting boys on the verge of Golding toward nameless savagery amid the Golding rottenness of the landscape, in Pinteresque exchanges of conversation with the women.
    “Theirs was the age of silent weeping, thought Anita; the subjugation of sound that ensured survival.”
    A special story that needs thinking about over more time than it takes to read and review it, imbued with the disarming strangenesses of Aickman or Ishiguro.
    “How many of you are there?”
    “Just seven,” said Sidney.
    Is it a coincidence there are seven competing areas, too, in the footnote?
    Be careful how you name places, too.

 

    Sunday, March 06, 2016

    Tasmin Little and Piers Lane




    Vinteuil or Testosterone?

    tASMIN

    Last night, I was privileged to attend the inaugural concert for 2016 of the Roman River Festival at the Mercury Theatre, Colchester, Essex.

     It featured Tasmin Little and Piers Lane playing the following violin sonatas…

    I enjoyed the Sarasate piece played by Melinda Blackman at the start, a young locally born performer here given experience of a relatively large audience.

    BEETHOVEN – Sonata 5 in F Major, Op. 24 ‘Spring’
    I used to have an LP record of this work in the 60s that I listened to a lot. I enjoyed reminding myself how good it is as I followed the classical –> romantic audit trail of lilting buoyancy and more pensive moments of this work, as projected by the immaculate performers Little and Lane.

    SZYMANOWSKI – Violin Sonata in D Minor, Op. 9
    I liked the performers’ confidence in presenting this less well known, earlier work of this composer, and experienced its endemic inchoateness at their hands. Romantic, yes, but basically off the wall, much to my taste. TL called it ‘heart on sleeve’ in her introduction. With the Intentional Fallacy Theory of Art, we shall never know.

    SZYMANOWSKI – Romance in D Major, Op. 23
    This short piece was only a few years later than the previous work but TL announced it was more in this composer’s trademark impressionist style, although I would say he is always more romantic than impressionistic, a recognisable style of his own which is hard to categorise. Just as Delius works are. And Franck…

    FRANCK – Sonata in A Major
    This is one of my favourite works of all time, and I was not disappointed by this bravura but sensitive performance. But put off by TL’s introduction, because I like to hear music for music’s sake, a purity that was diminished for me by being told (for the first time in my life) that it is (arguably, I’d say) about a Bride and Groom, the second movement being ‘full of testosterone’ and with church bells in the last movement! Franck has ever been the purest music for me, and I have always enjoyed the thought that this particular sonata may be the non-programmatic Vinteuil Sonata from Proust’s wonderful massive novel.

    An encore of William Lloyd-Webber’s recently discovered ‘In the Garden of Eastwell’ was sublime. You can tell where his son gets his composing skills from.

    Despite the peripheral misgivings expressed above, the whole performance was a landmark musical experience for me.

    [My previous Classical Music concert reviews: HERE.]

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    Saturday, March 05, 2016

    Sing Me Your Scars

     


    28 thoughts on “Sing Me Your Scars”

    1. PART I: HERE
      SING ME YOUR SCARS
      “The rot binds us to him as the stitches bind them to me. A prison, not of bars, but circumstance.”
      That’s the first time I have felt the word ‘circumstance’ as if it is needlepoint ringing the stance. A story of leitmotifs into a gestalt, as if the text is dreamcatching the central character even while I capture the story itself, a Yellow Wallpaper scenario where the woman is sewn or sown with the body parts that make her up, each part still belonging to the woman who once wore it and containing her volition as soul, the rot between healed continuously by the man who sewed them. It is achingly yearning and retributive as if the man needs stitching into this wallpaper of sensation the more he wants the music of each soul to keep playing for him. Not wishing to stint on my expression of this story’s worth and memorability, I thought I would mention that it might be something my favourite writer of all time, Elizabeth Bowen, would have written should she had lived today standing on the literary shoulders of a different age, as stitched to parts of Frances Oliver. Frances become Frankenstein?

    2. ALL THE PIECES WE LEAVE BEHIND
      “; her flesh, their battlefield.”
      A sort of synaesthesia-sensitivity (a form of grey-inverted synaesthesia?) combined with symptoms of OCD – and I wonder if Meg (Gem? – with all the ribbons or streamers of various colours angling from its facets including the fear of too many colours blending as grey) has always suffered this condition or whether it has just rubbed off on her by an encounter with a man when she was diverted (on her way home from work in a bookshop) by a police incident, causing her going past an area she usually avoided, too close to people, now, including her sense of migraine at early morning coffee places as accentuated by events, ricochet to ricochet, themselves becoming part of her condition, and an inner voice haunting her, speaking to her, or is that now her own real voice? A haunting mental condition that leaves bits of itself behind, as if it can exist without Meg…making me genuinely fear I have now caught it, too, from the grey insects, insects not only described by these words but also embodied within the text on the page itself. A story that induces a sort of book(shop)-synaesthesia.

    3. GIRL, WITH COIN
      “…now the scar is thick and ridged, easy to find even beneath the fabric of her shirt.”
      One of those unimpeachable stories, where it all clicks into place. Echoing the first story’s serial scars and the rotting between, and echoing, too, what I inferred as the inverse synaesthesia of the second story here as a rare condition that numbs pain so completely she has formed her life’s museum of stigmata as happenings or art installations that she performs on herself without pain…
      The rotting between is her relationship with her mother, historical and now, all depending on the toss of more than just an emotion-embedded coin…
      A perfect twist.

    4. PASKUTINIS ILIUZIJA (THE LAST ILLUSION)
      “Andrius opened his hands, and wisps of pale pink floated up. […] Tiny pink and yellow fish circled them, moving fast enough to create the illusion of ribbons.”
      With this book’s earlier sense of synaesthesia as a filter working in both directions of flow, this is a very touching alternate world story of a Lithuanian magician banned by the inimical soldiers from making magic, but he does so for his sick seven year old daughter and we infer her escape to that mythic world he creates by his magical story-telling and his own capture for so doing. Love is laying down your freedom for your loved one’s freedom, even if freedom is death, or vice versa, in both directions of flow.
      A magic-making story itself, worthy of your tears.
      I have read and reviewed this story before, but I have not yet revisited my review prior to my rereading of the story above. I shall now search out my earlier review and copy/paste it below…

      • iz5Copied from this 2013 review:
        Paskutinis Iliuzija (The Last Illusion) – Damien Walters Grintalis
        “A theater, its stage now silent and dark.”
        This work reminds me of the Mittel European-venue stories steeped in the menace and magic of 20th century history as commonly published by Ex Occidente Press, and I can give it no greater compliment than that. Here we’re faced with menace and given the promise of magic, as a man in dangerous times has recently lost his wife to the empty space next to him in the bed and his young daughter unwell to whom he tells stories in which feature the myths of their homeland country: during which he uses restrained magic (by spore or inherent mnemonic?), a magic that is banned by the menace, just as the theatre (here theater) was banned in the Butler story: but the magic prevails and acts as tough love… I cried at the end but “No, you can change the story, can’t you?” A story that one would not expect to be in a SF magazine but it does sit believably within the overall fiction setting with the poignancy of the protagonist’s own sense of restrained magic.
        It could create lions from shadows…”
        (In 2008, I saw the above painting by Christian Krohg (1852 -1925) inside the Oslo National Gallery. I wished her better.)

    5. GLASS BOXES AND CLOCKWORK GODS
      “After my skin eats the stitches away, I turn my key again.”
      It is as if a key has been turned upon the ethos of this book’s first story, with, here, Big and Little Big being two versions of the puppet-master, and those in the box with keys in their backs and metal showing are post-human versions of the single puppet or a form of Frankenstein monster as gestalt, separated out into discrete boxes, each yearning for some form of completion or just to remember their own name as well as the names of those with whom they once played and held hands. A dice game with memory or just another toss of a coin to reveal who you are, who you are not, who you will be with, who you will be without?
      Whatever the case, the colours remain understated, the emotions, too, deadpan like a not-mouth, but fraught, I feel, with a hidden passion, a blue not-wall. Leaving a bit of me behind in a box like this grey-covered book.

    6. SUGAR, SIN, AND NONSUCH HENRY
      “She found the on switch located in the centre of his back…”
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      A neat, if throwaway, tale acting here as what I assume to be the coda of this scar symphony known as Part I (HERE) of this book, Henry VIII, here, in real life, with his own SF version of the previous story’s key in his back, this Henry VIII being an engaging AI or robot, with all the looks and mannerisms of that most famous English King, a bit like other kings such as Elvis (mentioned in this story) and the King in Yellow (Henry has French connections, too, as well a palace called Nonsuch).
      This robot is purchased by a well-characterised stripper and dancer called Sugarsin who sometimes appears, in her stripping act, in the role of Anne Boleyn and allows this King to fall in love with her… Until as in a previous story, she has the crucial moment of decision almost like another toss of a coin….
      Holbein is also mentioned in this story, a painter whose elongated skull at the bottom of his Ambassadors work is almost as famous as his depiction of Henry VIII. Telling, I say.

    7. PART II: AND THE NOW
      RUNNING EMPTY IN A LAND OF DECAY
      “Eventually the laces will rot and the shoes will fall.”
      Laces as stitches, a sort of incantatory running and running amid a zombie holocaust, not the running sores, but the running stores that no one touches for good shoes…
      – running shoes as pieces or self left behind time and time again, while your loved one’s smile is glimpsed at his end, a devastating image that brought me up short and breathless, before I continued to the end of this relentless but short short.

    8. SCARRED
      “Ran the tip of her finger over the edge of a scar. Recited the names again.”
      More name-incantatoriness, here the scar being, for me, like a coin with an edge? Violet, a self-harmer with her own italicised alter-voice, here producing an inverted synaesthesic grey like a shadow to wreak goodness with its own form of harms to those who deserve them.
      I spent ages working out the end but when I finally worked it out the story made a satisfying sense, coiling back on me as if someone somewhere had carved the wrong name. Or the right one, after all, for whatever self needed harming.
      “A shadow emerged from the wound like a ribbon,…”

    9. THE TASTE OF TEARS IN A RAINDROP
      “A sound like tearing paper filled the air as a cracks appeared in her skin.”
      From dandelions as a favourite flower to dandelion fluff to a dandelion seed, this moving tale of a man grappling with legal access to his young daughter after marital break-up made me think there is no accident in tears being able to be wept as well as ripped.
      The haunting incantatory image of a woman dressed in blue in his backyard is some apotheosis of this grappling, and with this book’s own permeating “pieces of her began to fall, revealing a grey shadow behind them”, she is not so much an image but a flesh and blood woman, bruised colourfully, and one tries to fathom the gestalt of all these leitmotifs, even the one that she might have been looking “for a prince on a rescue mission.” But who was rescuing whom? And princes always hope to become kings.
      And a princess to be queen?

    10. ALWAYS, THEY WHISPER
      Pain as a woman’s lot is seen through the filter of the Perseus, Medusa, Poseidon myth, with whispering serpents under her head towel. Self-perception, self-assertion and herbal remedies abound. I am afraid this was mostly beyond me. My failings, not the story’s; I sensed but could not grasp its message. Some striking passages, excising serpents’ tongues.

    11. DYSPHONIA IN D MINOR
      “Would I become a story? Once upon a time, there was a woman who sang of hurt and broken things. Who tried to fix her heart by shattering the one who tore it to pieces.”
      …not so much leaving these pieces behind, but building them, by singing, into structures, bridges and scar museums of Voice.
      I feel the need, but hesitate, to claim this to be one of my favourite stories ever. It is often difficult to factor in an overweening passion of the reading moment. All I will say, though, is that it seems as if this story was written purely with my taste in literature in mind, a symphony in movements of bridge architecture, a rhapsodic construction between Lucia and Delanna as intermittent lovers, employed to Voice arches et al, sometimes twining their voices together to fulfil sometimes cynical commissions, sometimes getting the buildings accidentally wrong with glitches in the Voice’s own architecture, Delanna (the symphony’s own narrator) sometimes deliberately destabilising Lucia’s buildings, but all of this deployed with an essential literary power underpinning a sense that the two women’s own power of Voice TRULY exists…with an essential expectation of always.
      A Sapphic relationship to throw the die for.

    12. SHALL I WHISPER TO YOU OF MOONLIGHT, OF SORROW, OF PIECES OF US?
      “; the ring is only a circle of empty without your skin to bind it.”
      …now a circular bridge to match those standard semi-circular-tending ones in the previous story, as part of more of Voice’s incantatory italicisations, that skin-singing of ‘never let me go’, with the pieces of nine “slick beneath my fingertips” photographs of your loved one, left, as it were, not behind as someone left pieces before in this book, but in advance, left step-by-step as a structure of future’s accretively felt bereavement following your loved one’s clinching last illness…
      I felt the context of this book gave this story an added power, since this is what I wrote about it HERE when I read it before in 2014:
      Shall I Whisper to You of Moonlight, of Sorrow, of Pieces of Us? by Damien Angelica Walters
      “…and I have a knot in my chest that won’t go away.”
      A yearning story in short steps. Straightforward in one sense: love, death, loss, regret, recurrent haunting by dead one. The leaving of photographs as part of that haunting works quite well and lessens the straightforwardness. But, for me, essentially predictable with a slightly pretentious aura.

    13. IMMOLATION: A LOVE STORY
      “She’s burning him up with her presence.”
      This burn-shorted short of a scalding coda to the NOW of Part II, the precise optimum moment of NOW, as the shoesalesman’s own fantasies about a customer in the shoe shop later reach this book’s exact synaesthesic point of contact, perhaps the barely perceptible space between the two fingertips of God and Adam on the Sistine ceiling, almost a Dickensian spontaneous combustion of come-uppance, of passion and of over-dressing, but whose skin burnt first?

    14. PART III: AND AWAY
      MELANCHOLIA IN BLOOM
      “My thoughts twist and turn, and the words spiral out to nowhere. A ribbon I can’t catch, no matter how hard I try.”
      Not from Ulysses, but a Bloom of Petals kept in a box as desperate discrete mnemonics to assuage Alzheimer’s, whatever the ribbon or stream of consciousness.
      A terribly moving counterpoint of mother and daughter (and eight year old granddaughter), the mother’s thoughts italicised as striving to ward off memory loss, the other grappling with the clues as to the nature of that memory loss.
      Another story of the pieces left behind, a story like life without magic or a happy ending. But it somehow feels like magic in a way to face it and contextualise it within such a rhapsody of words in this story and other stories in this book so far.
      “My fingertips are cold and I can feel the pieces of me straining to break free.”

    15. imageIRON AND WOOD, NAIL AND BONE
      “You know you’re here because of the broken pieces of you,…”
      A powerful self-threnody of contradictory wishes, some wanting, some not wanting, the stigmata of being crucified upon one of twelve crosses in a room, but does the word powerful truly convey the power of this piece where you follow the protagonist’s recurrent crucifixion, piece by piece, scar by scar… nail by nail?
      The nails explicitly replace the previous story’s petals as the required mnemonics.
      I listened to this as I read it – http://youtu.be/WYiKqrKXdhg

    16. AND ALL THE WORLD SAYS HUSH
      “A homeless man hears the rustle of coins…”
      As if each moment is a throw of the die.
      This short short in a diaphanous skirt is a ‘bifurcation’ of Tis a Pity She’s A Whore and the Lady Vanishes, another optimum moment as over-dressing, here and earlier in this book, becomes a smoothing off for a non-sticky or unsynaesthesic existence.

    17. THEY MAKE OF YOU A MONSTER
      “Her fingertips leak thin grey trails of smoke.”
      This accretive book now reminds me of the recurrent power of the earlier crucifixion room, here Isabel’s fingers one by one broken in a cell, a cell near the sound of sea, near a sense of alternate or real history, a king with six summers if not six wives, and torture to make Isabel recognise his kingship, with healers, Sapphic memories and a fall…but I sense she somehow meets the king who talks incognito in the cell, and then we already know of her skin to skin synaesthesic or burning magic to magic her free or to magic the kingdom into a queendom…?
      “…a magic that has been perverted. Inverted. Fire to ice. Healing to–“

    18. PAPER THIN ROSES OF MAYBE
      “where flat meets real”
      Another story, like Dysphonia, that I weigh in the balance of future memory.
      Where flat mets real in the nounship of ‘forever’, ‘maybe’ and ‘must have now’, earlier, I somehow recall, in this book, ‘musthavenow’…
      When I used the word accretive about the previous story, I nearly used the word ‘creeping’, but I discarded it, as this book is not at all creepy, but creeping is somehow right, as once curved if not straight lovers Maddie and Joshua await some unknown creeping as if into a 1900s snapshot sepia or grey, some sort of post-holocaust world expected to beset them, one that is grey or, at best, pastel coloured, attenuating, yes, creeping…
      It astonishingly fits the mood of this whole book where, inter alia, synaesthesia becomes grey but also remains as synaesthesia.
      A compelling, involving love story, where this book’s earlier mnemonic photographs, nails or petals become paper roses.

      • A sort of inverted – to echo the second quote above in the previous story’s review – Dysphonic effect, where the Voice now gradually uncreates the bridges instead of building them?
        Part III’s ‘And Away’…

    19. GREY IS THE GAUGE OF HIS STORM
      “People will tell you that damage makes the fabric stronger.”
      The only way not to escape but to remake this world is via the preternatural power of literature. Collecting the threads together strengthens them. Damage, counterintuitively, too.
      Dandelion fluff leads into this stunning exposition of sewn linings as personal gestalts, with their stitches and other symphonic or dysphonic movements of sewing-terminology, dress-making, knitting and quilting, like my wife’s purple quilt shown fortuitously earlier in this review and I recall that the woman narrator in this story has a the favourite colour of purple, or is it this book’s earlier Violet? Whether low or high denier.
      But this is not all lightness and joy, or shimmery denier, with a sort of curved-straight love triangle between the narrator and a woman friend as well as with a man who, I guess, stitches her into his own version of inferred loom or sewing texture or sampler or even perhaps that wallpaper I mentioned regarding the story ‘Sing Me Your Scars’. Tropes, here, too, of a patchwork doll, grey clouds like her heart, lining as a soul, a mutual self-harming, tearing pieces free (leaving them behind or in advance?), the inability to see “where he ends and I begin”…
      “Maybe love always leaves scars.”
      Or, as I might ask, stockings leaving ladders (to climb or descend?)
      Text leaving meaningful attenuations?

    20. LIKE ORIGAMI IN WATER
      “I carry the bag down to the bridge where Johnny and I shared our first kiss, the best kiss.”
      A bagful of Origami animals made from “slick beneath my fingers” paper, some successful, others not, like the not-elephant. Johnny is not-Lady Vanishes, I guess, as his disease of body-part attenuation and annulment, textual and real, reaches a critical level, and the female book watches with deepening sorrow, as do I. But a sorrow that makes the perfect coda for AWAY as well as HERE and NOW, in fact for the whole book.
      I don’t know how it all works, but it does. The paper has to run out somewhere. And then the truth begins. Each mnemonic page a piece left behind to regather.
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