Friday, November 04, 2016

The Big Book of Science Fiction (4)

Part Four of my real-time review continued from HERE.

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Edited by Ann and Jeff VanderMeer

Vintage Books 2016

When I real-time review this 1210 page anthology, my comments will appear in the thought stream below.

21 responses to “The Big Book of Science Fiction”



  1. Part Four of my real-time review continued from HERE.

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    REIKO’S UNIVERSE BOX by Kajio Shinji
    Translated by Toyoda Takashi and Gene van Troyer
    “Look! There’s a universe inside!”
    That should be on the cover of this book, from emptiness came a universe, not only the Big Bang of stars, black holes, comets etc. But a greater universe of fiction that lives within and outside of the real universe’s box container only of itself. With that thought, this otherwise sad story of a gradually broken marriage, to which couple the box was given as a wedding present, would have been even sadder.


  2. SWARM by Bruce Sterling
    “Consider this varicose vein along my shin.”
    A Trading skein of ruthful or ruthless factions and ert or inert races, converging in this para-Whovian trade upon, for me, tantamount to some case of cosmic Brexit by Alfriel, the human who studies alien linguistics and in this tale combines an eventual gestalt of ruthful, ruthless, ert and inert, a SWARM to be tapped into, making the reader’s suppurating brain feel like all parts of that experimental trade, an IRONY that starts in Afriel’s mind and eventually becomes the whole universe, when seen from the Toynbeean perspective of the theories of challenge and response in territorially terrestrial history to be transposed to cosmic history, and even within and then beyond the pheromones themselves….
    (Believe it or not, within this rarefied scenario there is a love interest for Afriel, but like all love stories, it eventually ends in tears, whether tears told of or not.)


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    MONDOCANE by Jacques Barbéri
    Translated by Brian Evenson
    “The new hills are very beautiful.”
    An astonishing vision in this short short of the end of the war and what it has done to the Earth and its inhabitants. Nothing can be said to convey it here other than what it is, prose conjoined to our brains like, for example, gas masks to the face. Dammit, that gives no idea nor do The Hills, The Cities…
    (The gestalt of this book is beginning to get that way, too, if we are not careful enough to unstick it each night from what we stuck it to during the day.)


  4. BLOOD MUSIC by Greg Bear
    “Besides, I’m not saying every cell was a distinct entity. They cooperated.”
    …and that may be the essence of triangulating hyper-imaginative literature, each cell of fiction, its own synchronous shard of random truth and fiction. I don’t fully understand the science in this story, but it is the inversion of earlier colonisations by mankind of space, now this is like a whole universe of cells raping you from within, becoming you as a gestalt that they create from YOU, and for themselves, and all ironically as a result of a deliberate act by one of us…. all with the sound of their music through the blood, for me, like Stockhausen. The lure of devouring love. (Not unlike cavemen with blue piss seeking a computer to mend.)


  5. BLOODCHILD by Octavia E. Butler
    “The whole procedure was wrong, alien. I wouldn’t have thought anything about her could seem alien to me.”
    Gan had a gun. That is. The crux in this internecine symbiosis between humans and aliens is that the internecine element is disguised (lovingly, if cynically, nurtured) by a birth process between them, just another pragmatic system like gynogenesis or parthenogenesis. This is macho gunogenesis, only swaddled against by provision of dead animals if it comes to term too early before the pregnant human male is eaten from within by the impregnated eggs. Otherwise a touching many-aspected relationship is depicted between the alien and her ‘godson’ berth. Or ‘gunson’. A well crafted visualisation of all the processes and the nature of the alien. And wrenching images and implications that resonate on. Like being raped from within as in Blood Music, the previous story. Racial miscegenation or a gender pecking-order or animal rights in our human world here as a fable with oblique moral as to who or what is master or mistress of – or has primacy over – whom or what. Or it is as purely story-telling and undidactic as this book will allow it to be?


  6. VARIATION ON A MAN by Pat Cadigan
    “We’re hoping you’ll help him learn how to combine the various elements that make up a composer into a whole that will be greater than the sum of the parts.”
    This consuming work, like the previous Blood Music and Bloodchild, throbs with ideas of being raped from within, here by a variation of one’s own subsequent Proustian self that has wiped the original or a self that someone has caused to be wiped. The protagonist narrator is a ‘pathosfinder’, employed to restore the composer Gladney – and the procedures described are hypnotically incantatory, as we follow them in this brainaltering text itself.
    When this story was first published in 1984, I was just about for the first time discovering Philip Glass (today’s most successful composer) and in that year I was present at the London premiere of the masterpiece of his opera Akhenaten.
    Two Gladneys make a Glass? Maybe, preternaturally?
    The pathosfinder’s ‘pearlnecklacing’, if not the eye-popping, seems the optimum description of Glass’s music…”it nagged at me”. “Set it to repeat once…” The feeling of space, vertigo. A kind of survivor guilt. “the only person who’d ever met the stranger in himself.”
    A kind of Glass tuning fork…
    “Maybe if I’d known more about music — the real hard-core stuff, mathematics of progressions and so forth–”
    ‘The images began to flow more continuously from him, rolling over us in a tumbling series, gargantuan confetti.”
    “The universe is movement, the movement of vibration.”
    “…and allowed it to replay as the original recording without changes.”
    “Each sweep of the string through space created the universe of the note anew,…”
    “…the tumblers were beyond the end of the melody. But still they went on, and the music went on with them,…”
    A story that still vibrates within me. As if the phenomenon of Philip Glass would never have existed without these Cadigan procedures.


  7. PASSING AS A FLOWER IN THE CITY OF THE DEAD by S.N. Dyer
    “…his final days a contest to see which would kill him first — the disease or the treatment, the pain of the invading lymphocytes or the pain of the poisons that fought the cells.”
    A fourth story in a row with a raping from within, here the human ontology of oncology, colonised within space cylinders as social groups immunised away with depleted blood and as found art (cancers and blood as abstract designs) paintings and sculptures, where the still healthy are just as much a disruptive cell as a sick human. While guns were illegal in Butler, here knives are banned, too, but that does not take account of broken vases sub-letting the unred streams of blood. Making this story at last, I guess, not red but read.
    I’m reading while above this text instead of within it, as trying to understand it between the actual lines might subsume the reader, whose own blood sings silently, but some other readers whose blood still have secrets of potential pain, others already open declarations of it.


  8. NEW ROSE HOTEL by William Gibson
    “The river flowed beneath low, stone arches. The street was empty. Europe was a dead museum.”
    Another reader’s-hindsight-with-author’s-foresight of a metaphor for Brexit, each of us a slow-motion realtime Edge of a fast-motion hindsight-foresight of personal and industrial espionage where people you rivalled are/were the Interchangeable products of value while real products are/were the quick-out-of-time-and-out-of-use cybernetics that dot the panoplies with Ligeti/Ligotti atmospheres during Blade Runner type film scenarios run backwards globally. Not new rose, but down risen.


  9. POTS by C.J. Cherryh
    “Life makes life.”
    A startlingly impossible story of scientists and archaeologists that blends Toynbeean challenge-and-response with time travel, but not Whovian time travel; it is more a looping of beginnings with ends, with deliberate glitches by AI robots to turn normal causality in infinite directions as seasoned by mystical reincarnation mixed with scientific cloning, and peppered with meteor or asteroid disaster scenarios or with POTS as not another STOP button like mortality but ironically as choice SKULLS waiting on shelves rather than buried in the past.


  10. SNOW (1986) by John Crowley
    “Once, hungover in a New York hotel, watching a sudden snowfall out the immense window, she said to me, ‘Charlie, I’m going to die of fun.'”
    This is a classic literary characterisation of a flighty Georgie, a fun and mirrors gal, yet there is another flighty accompaniment, a Wasp, a watcher, a pre-realityTV device, that produces a filmed memorial in the memorial Park, random and non-searchable, like this one for Georgie, events and moments in her life, for her widower to watch. A poignant metaphor for Alzheimer’s, between the ACCESS/RESET, the encroaching static of snow upon the shuttling of ‘Little/Big’, of Screen/Life, today an endemic plague foreshadowed by this text. Ingenious fiction that makes you cry over its utter truth. A reading experience to cherish, thanks to this book.


  11. THE LAKE WAS FULL OF ARTIFICIAL THINGS by Karen Joy Fowler
    In tantalising synergy with the previous story (making each of the two stories, for me, even more powerful by this new contiguity within this anthology), and the Fowler one builds a repath to the past for a woman and her original lover before his supposedly being killed during the Viet Nam war, a repath via an over-kindness SF lucid-dreaming method of only tapping happy memories – but an experience that inadvertently morphs into undetermined real contact with the dead person by time travel? And the ending is made even more powerful and poignant by reference to Zeno’s Paradox (a paradox I have already mentioned at least three times during this real-time review, and the link for this – https://cernzoo.wordpress.com/the-big-book-of-science-fiction/ – is a better way than time travel to check it out…)


  12. THE UNMISTAKEABLE SMELL OF WOOD VIOLETS (1985) by Angélica Gorodischer
    Translated by Marian Womack
    This is the apotheosis of HyperNormalisation written before its time, some geographical prediction of fused borders that only Brexit broke into reality very recently, one where Russia is here called atypical, the President a bit-part actor for whom Reagan no doubt was only the ice-breaker for Trump, and Dali’s Hidden Faces came into a sort of South American existence from the only novel he managed to write, trans-sex openly spoken of, and woman the astronaut to disprove the fabrication of any set-up or set-aside world, gone to Gibson’s earlier Edge in this book, all of us gone today, we realise, as our reality enters the version that is Gorodischer’s Edge. “Women are capricious creatures….”


  13. THE OWL OF BEAR ISLAND (1986) by Jon Bing
    The Russian bear, ‘the Russian’ from Blackwood’s Centaur?
    Alien possession where the alien is an owl or at least owl-like in our terms, for whatever purpose ‘riding’ this lone researcher on Bear Island, far north of Norway, with a ‘gray zone’ (gray owl?) as interface or buffer between us and the Soviets, Soviets now today’s Russia, the old ‘atypical Russia’ of the previous story, but what is this owl after, some trace element?
    A Bing who never morphed into Google, sets a Google-like computer trap for the owl to release its and his (as a writer’s) human protagonist….
    A fascinating preternatural retrocausality of fiction from now (today as you read it) to then (when it was written), rather than a premonition or prophecy.
    This book certainly knows how to pick them! And its gestalt grows extraponentially.


  14. READERS OF THE LOST ART by Élisabeth Vonarburg
    Translated by Howard Scott
    “There is an implied rhythm, the suggestion of a pattern in the permutations, a hint of an intention in the sequences.”
    This is another literary revelation provided by this book, if books can do anything other than be print on paper. If I had sat down to extrapolate on the traditional concept of releasing a sculpture from inside a block of stone, I don’t think I would have come up with this story. It is on a roll, in overdrive, extending beyond itself, whereby the slowly obsessive procedure is not only read about but also watched from within the text, like a show or happening/art-installation. And the story’s equivalent of the sculptor has a tool-armour that divests itself as the sculpture is itself divested of material which it is sculpted away methodically, empirically, surgically, chemically, electrically, prismatically, where words are like a demonstrably scientific process of striptease, a bodily flensing and flaying, and the watchers, or at least two of them, are in some sort of loop with this process, pair with pair. We readers, too? And my gestalt real-time reviewing as a reading process, aka dreamcatching, hawling, is also such a synergous process of flensing and self-flensing. No wonder this work (to which I have been unable to do full justice in this relatively short description of it) has READERS in the title… (A synergous flensing of author by translator, too?)
    “A code, or more accurately changing codes — the rhythms have rhythms. The combinations have combinations, and the law (or the laws) governing it all hides, elusively, in those converging metamorphoses.”


  15. A GIFT FROM THE CULTURE by Iain M. Banks
    “I was floating on a sea of possibilities, but parched of choices.”
    A gay (when gay was illegal) hitman where his hit is a phallic starship and its passengers. But there is far less to it than that; it is whether a potential suicide bomber type of our day is worse than being an emotionally and unprincipledly self-destructive hitman, without death cleansing him first. All of this is tied into Banks of Economic Communities that bring a prophetic sniff of Brexit into this complex equation. As you can see vast universal cultural schisms far less significant than the personal story itself.
    I loved the chatty gun the hitman was given. A MUST read.


  16. PARANAMANCO by Jean-Claude Dunyach
    Translated by Sheryl Curtis
    “It’s a game, you see. Draw a map and you control the territory. The more accurate your map is, the more efficient your control is.”
    image…which is my whole ambition with regard to this huge, softly engineered text vehicle, with puffy-padded partitions. words heaped within each lolloping flabby sheaf of pages, a book that is almost physically sexual, disregarding what its words mean, a book that is definitely female of some kind, if not maternalistic like the caterpillars searching priapically through this story —
    a story that presents another revelation for the reader, a city that is what I shall call a gaianimal, with its own interstices and partitions, one with 44 presumed glitches that are somehow perfectly identical fragments, a tale not without humour, of an oldster who prefers alcohol to the water of the living city’s sexual wiles. You actually grow to believe in this prehensile place, and it should be on google maps. I reckon. It can only be read in a lolloping book like this one, wherein I have lived and explored for a month or two already, its unmapped and mapped labyrinths of my new emerging mind’s enticed imagination….


  17. CRYING IN THE RAIN by Tanith Lee
    This seems to be another dangerous vision, like AYE, AND GOMORRAH and SPORTING WITH THE CHID, but more obvious, more gratuitous, less convincing, here with the supposed aura of under-aged girls, or girls made to seem under-aged with talc etc, involving entitlement created from a form of health and climate apartheid, and the ticket, to gain shelter under the safe side of that apartheid, is such selling ‘in kind’ of sex with the young girls by their mothers to the men in the shelter. Involving the use of the word ‘cance’ as a verb from ‘cancer’…
    Not sure about this one. But it is certainly worth having a view on in the context of this book’s gestalt.


  18. THE FROZEN CARDINAL (1987) by Michael Moorcock
    “I frequently have a peculiar sense of closeness to the home planet, even though we are light-years from it.”
    The diary writer is effectively writing a serialised letter to his or her lover and the fact that the gender of the writer – and of the intended recipient? – is not made known or is simply uncertain in trans terms, in a story written by an author with the name Moorcock, and a character called Helander, is not accidental, I feel, in view of the absurdist nature of the Catholic and catholic Cardinal found frozen in a an icebound world light years from Earth. And the spiritual repercussions. The rhapsodic feeling that one has come home with this story. That we are all one and for one whatever our gender, religion, and orientation-as-distance-from-Earth – Earth only one letter different from an anagram of Death. Not one with God, but with some absurdity even greater than God. An absurdity stronger than Ontology or Teleology.
    And that the world light years from Earth is called Moldavia, which is on Earth, too. A classic that keeps on giving – and taking. Also treatable just as an intriguing SF adventure.
    [A story written in the same diary/letter format and first published in the late 1980s, too, is my own DEAR MUM: http://www.dowse.com/fiction/Lewis.html (referred to earlier in this review) and, now in connection with the above Moorcock, it relates earlier to what I said in this real-time review about Clarke’s THE STAR https://cernzoo.wordpress.com/the-big-book-of-science-fiction/#comment-334 and Asimov’s THE LAST QUESTION https://cernzoo.wordpress.com/the-big-book-of-science-fiction/#comment-341 ]


  19. RACHEL IN LOVE by Pat Murphy
    “Rachel likes fairy tales and she likes happy endings. She has the mind of a teenage girl, but the innocent heart of a young chimp.”
    This is either
    A masterpiece of a tale dealing with mankind’s relationship with animals, and despite a rather unbelievable set-up for this scenario, a young girl’s view of man’s sexual nature through the eyes of a chimp.
    Or
    An exploitative fiction where man’s sexual nature is appeased through being allowed to peep in on these scenes, where Rachel grotesquely applies make-up to her chimp’s face, as Tanith Lee’s girl applies talc and warm showers…
    Jake prefers the even more exploited women in his saucy mag…
    Her hoped-for happy ending, however seems, set to appear at the end…?
    A truly provocative work, in which I am severely split as to my attitude. Whether filtered through my Jekyll or my Hyde. My Paranamaco or my Vonarburg.


  20. SHARING AIR by Manjula Padmanabhan
    “; QED, they controlled the air supply.”
    The critical tussle regarding startlingly hindsight didactic works — for the modern reader with modern didactic fashions — being included in any ‘best of’ sort of historic fiction anthology is whether they are great stories, too.
    I believe this one arguably is. The retrocausal pre-hindsight foresight of a decades old fiction work of seeing what type of air we breathed today as a futuristic fad for people to recreate in the even further future. An arguably great story, yes, short though it is, one that hints that the future people who do NOT recreate the way we breathed today are missing out on something valuable. A diluted didacticism amid some shocking casts backwards for us today, where this germ-filled flabby lolloping book heavily laden on my lap shares the same air as me – and can then be passed around for others to use! Ah, that’s the publisher’s incentive to buy your own copy! Or even get an ebook version? (IS there an ebook version?)
    The gestalt now emerging from this lolloping huggable giant is a post-religio-sex-scientific Gaia as the new age-transgressive transgender radiating more distaff than spear.


  21. This review will now be concluded HERE.

Tuesday, November 01, 2016

The Gradual by Christopher Priest


25 thoughts on “THE GRADUAL by Christopher Priest”

  1. 1 – 3
    “: too young to show the emotion we felt, too old not to feel it.”
    I intend this review to be gradual, too. I love modernist classical music, so this book shows great promise for me, as I sit here reading it, also sea-adjacent, music for me being a yearning for something beyond that sea, beyond the madness of today’s landed existence, yearning towards hinted islands. I am already entranced by the two young brothers, one drafted for an indeterminate war, leaving the younger one as the main word-musical protagonist upon this book’s left behind ground of ominous undercurrents.
    Gradual and unspoilered.
  2. 4 – 7
    “It is only in silence that music is pure.”
    I dread spoiling this book’s spell, breaking its apotheosis (as surely it is) of the Dream Archipelago, with my intermittent staccato refrains disguised as reviews, as if this book is one of the islands itself that needs to be kept away from prying, undeserving eyes. The text’s implied music is beautiful to hear. The flow seems indeed gradual, it has that feel, but jumps silences of time in fell leaps, as we follow the composer’s life, a deadpan panning-out that is utterly simple, simple but tantalisingly complex, delightfully eked out through the most naïvely fast speed of slow-motion that any literature has heretofore managed? A gradual to measure by its responsorial rhythm?
    • 8…
      Ah, just another day and only a few paragraphs and I see that sense of ‘gradual’ is now made clear by the text itself. I confirm that I had not seen this when writing my entry above yesterday.
      I can see, too, that this already wonderful book is going to present its own problems for the conscientious real-time reviewer…
  3. 8 – 13
    “‘I have played your records, Sandro,’ he said
    ‘Do you like them?’ I was pleased.
    ‘I do like them.’ A little later he said, ‘I have played your records, Sandro.’
    ‘Thanks, Dad.'”
    This book is like saying something gently, and saying it again later, a bit of minimalist music like Glass? Or more like Finnissy or Sculthorpe? I felt sad at this conversation, but have been genuinely compelled to turn each page of this book in forgotten suspended disbelief. But I need to eke it out, and not tell you about the plot, but repetition is involved in other aspects, some seemingly negative like repetitions as the suspected stealing of intellectual-artistic property, and invitations to the gentle islands of the narrator Sandro’s soul, even if he is temperamental, sometimes irascible, up front. Best to hide it when a guest elsewhere, such as being a reader invited by the book’s engaging context of content and form, invited into this literally enchanting world, taking the self on a tour of its otherwise insular words by means of my own paternally half-senile mind, a mind with inferred incantatoriness as its uncertain Ground, leaving Glass, leaving Glaund…
  4. 14 & 15
    You know when you are in the hands of a master writer. And the scenes of Sandro’s voyage into the Islands, that he knows as the Dream Archipelago, are absolutely priceless. You feel you are really sailing there, while comparing the monochrome of his Glaund departure point with the vistas now presented to him…. And the intriguing double achronology of time, on this weekend when we put the clock back an hour in the UK.
    Important at least to me – In 2012, I somehow, in my own madness, publicly linked Priest with Peter Sculthorpe, a composer of classical music about Islands, who later died in 2014 at the age of 85. This link was in connection with Priest’s ‘Scunthorpe’ article that I mentioned, as part of that Sculthorpe connection, on my blogs at that time here and here. I would now wish to think I brought Priest and Sculthorpe together, for this GRADUAL masterwork, a masterwork that surely it already is in my eyes. Wishful thinking, perhaps, that I was such a match maker.
  5. 16 – 23
    “All these islands unimaginably numerous, shaped but unstructured, washed by the seas, these fragments. I ached to understand the islands, but the reality confused the image.”
    I cannot express how this book succeeds in taking you in. The plot compellingly unfolds, and any careless talk of it may not only spoil it for those still to read it but also endanger those IN it, I somehow feel. I received the impression, meanwhile, amid all the things that went wrong in accretive triviality during Sandro’s cultural trip to these wonderful places, that there was more going on beyond the plot. Also reminding me insidiously of when I was in Russia, a few years ago, that although welcome there, the red tape of travel was inimical and made me FEEL unwelcome. And the concept of the tangible stave as an island-travel necessity is something beyond the scope of this review to explain, but rest assured it is unforgettable, as are many other things in this story. (I have been fruitfully listening to my spell-binding Peter Sculthorpe CD while reading this latest section.)
  6. 24 – 28
    “‘That’s what I can’t explain,’ I said. ‘It’s a problem and I don’t understand it myself.'”
    It’s as if this book and I are talking to each other, one in normal print, the other in italics. On returning each time to my real life from out of this book, as if from my own cultural trips among its islands, I have empathised more and more with Sandro. Synchronising though is now a better word than empathising for this phenomenon. I dare not breathe a word of its plot, a fact which rather diminishes the need for this real-time gradual review at all. Suffice to say, at this stage (about a third of the way through the book? – and the fact that I need to put a ? there somehow seems significant) I can say this is a book you simply must read, as the fact that you are reading my review at all means you are the sort of acclimatisable person who, yes, simply must read it.
  7. 29 – 35
    “I had broken a self-imposed rule, instinctively developed throughout my adult life: keep out of sight, don’t become known for anything except what you do, and therefore what you have some control over.”
    Telling, in view of this review. As if I, too, have crossed some invisible lines of book reviewing, like revealing certain things I should not have done, or withholding too many others I should have revealed. I also mentioned Russia earlier as a random example of something, and now I sense Sandro Sussken may be, among others aspects, a reflection of the historical Shostakovich in the way Sandro’s new symphony is commissioned. And he is subtly forced into an “ante-room” before meeting surely one of the most insidiously inimical women you will ever meet in literature…
  8. 36 – 41
    “Every island had a different note.”
    Sandro’s picaresque narrative ill-mapped island-hopping symphony to escape the actual commissioned symphony is full of anxiety about broken travel plans, and, for me, like Shostakovich’s 4th, a shuttling of broken themes that need some gestalt to make them whole, a mix of tuning islands with the use of his stave rather than with a fork, and with ‘help’ from adepts and officious officials to compensate for the “detriment” from his earlier dyssynchrony as a by-product of dissonance…
    I here divulge such oblique thoughts of mine as I travel this deadpan gradual incantatory text alongside Sandro, thoughts tangential to the plot itself as my attempt at covering up for otherwise issuing spoilers. (Real-time for the first time in my dreamcatching career ceases to work properly since I started it in 2008.)
    Rest assured, meantime, that the flow of narrative is irresistible, whether you choose to go with or against its tides in different versions of pace.
  9. “The gradual is being compensated.”
    This seems to sum up my whole life heretofore!
    I have been returning to the Severn Bore in earlier Priest…plus the ‘triangulation of literary coordinates’ ethos of my gestalt real-time reviews … and the ‘congruence’ and ‘coordinates’ in…..
    42 & 43
    Now just read in real-time.
    “Some islands have similar coordinates.”
    “Congruent is the size and shape of the gradual tide.”
  10. 44 – 47
    “…a kind of silent impasse having been achieved.”
    The operative word being ‘achieved’? This is musically fugal both as a fugitive from authority and as a deciding which of his various intentions are more important than that actual act of fleeing, making me think if the author’s own treatment of The Intentional Fallacy is conscious or otherwise.
    Judging by my own reaction, Sandro’s evolution into almost random zigzagging through the islands is one that sums up the reader’s life, its need for ‘baggage’, or its yearning to unload such baggage, its pursuance by guilt and other detriments, its preconditioning by the ‘homeland’ whence one left upon these gradually life-serialised ‘Rites of Passage’ (the title of Sculthorpe’s strangely musicalised theatrical work). [Hachure, mentioned in this text, is almost like a musical score by Stockhausen? His massively serialised opera named after Days of the Week was featured in a recent fiction I reviewed here.]
    “All emails were automatically copied to the government department responsible for overseeing communications.”
  11. 48 – 51
    “I was engaged with the finer problems of gained and lost time –”
    I could kick myself. As a storm approaches on the latest island Sandro reaches – and a significant, shocking, heart-wrenching scene transpires, a fulfilment of one of his active ‘intentions’ rather than his passive need to flee – a scene about which I dare not breathe a word. And what I could kick myself about is not drawing reference till now to Marcel Proust’s monumental ‘À la recherche du temps perdu’ that is often translated as ‘In Search of Lost Time’ as well as ‘Remembrance of Things Past’, a series of novels with which I have been obsessed for most of my life. And my particular interest in its theme of ‘Proustian selves’ that does seem at least arguably relevant to that significant scene mentioned above…
    And isn’t one of those constituents of the Proust work entitled ‘The Fugitive’?
  12. 52 – 55
    “It was sometimes a shock to remind myself of the madness of the gradual.”
    Tellingly, I note that I have already used the word ‘madness’ in connection with myself when first noticing the Sculthorpe connection above. And now it seems to be some observations by Sandro himself – when comparing his Proustian selves in the mirror or hearing some of his own music plagiarised….?
    I sense the coordinates of this book’s end gestalt or congruency are already shaping up, whether stridently or sweetly remains to be seen. Whatever the eventual outcome, I am already convinced this is a significant book to real-time review, possibly the most significant I have ever real-time reviewed, or or have ever tried to real-time, if real-time can be thus used as a verb?
    [There are 2 ‘textual detriments’ in this section – Page 241, line 19 and Page 250, line 10.]
    “Whoever was playing it, whoever was on the record, had turned it into something bland and loud and rhythmic, had made it cheap and repetitive, made it obvious and moronic, but it was still mine.”
  13. 56 – 60
    “I had already entered the state of mind familiar to me whenever I was being escorted by an adept. I became passive, accepting, not enquiring, letting myself be moved around and told what to do.”
    Another reminder of the stages of self through which I progress, most of my life believing I was a mere counter not a player, not an adept, heading towards Temmil’s retirement homes that had replaced the cultural centres… until I started real-time reviewing? Real real-time.
    The lackadaisical submission to tiredness, of mooring and unmooring upon the slough of tides, an incantatory repetition of gradients and detriments, and “time slippage”, and this text is the perfect lesson, thus the perfect literature. A “compositional bliss” as Sandro hits his Sixth Piano Sonata. One thing I have loved about modern and traditional ‘classical music’ is the non-descriptive titles in numbered order.
    “I began to realize that I best understood the effect of the gradual if I interpreted it in musical terms.”
  14. 61 – 68
    “It comes to you, but you have to surrender to it.”
    This real-time review is a half-silent cadenza offered in due humility to this important book, as Sandro catches a cadenza within it just before the book’s own version of the Earth Cry, a cadenza based on his own work. We are all perhaps subject to unseen forces, as I imagine invisible volcanoes around our own now Brexited islands… age and youth in strange disharmony. Like some characters in this book.
    With the cadenza played, I now expect before long a lingering coda…as I continue to trace, in my own terms, Sandro’s trials and tributaries of time – and of sporadic love.
    “…the original score, the black pen marks on the staves, but they were cryptic, had no sound, were written in code –“
  15. Perhaps the most codate coda ever…
    69 – 79
    “It matters only that you have done it. You might never know how.”
    I wonder if coming home is like dying, in this book’s “subjective time”, that is? Its own culmination of dissonant intervals?
    Meantime, can time be collusive as well as mean? It seems highly appropriate that what I see as the next best thing to the two Proustian selves of Sandro finally meet with a violin on each of their backs, to make hugging difficult, as I had often earlier expected Sandro to find himself disembarking upon the island where he already was, but never did! The single violin that played the Vinteuil sonata?
    As I still watch the text’s “securing ropes” and “winches”, I realise that my own mooring and unmooring of it must end … a process that I call ‘hawling’ as a dreamcatching of this truly wonderful book (a book that fully deserves and will get accolades) … must end at least for a while.
    I am not there yet. But I feel I have now at least been granted “…a growing awareness of the gradual changes brought by time, and the mysteries of ageing.”
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